Recent Comments

6/1/24, 5:27 AM
So happy another chapter is out! Can't wait for Act 2! Favorite trigger so far has gotta be the pec flex. Fight song is pretty creative though!

6/2/24, 5:10 AM
@[FlufferGuy](/user/show/10050310) Glad you liked it! My favorite scene personally is in the next chapter, so I hope you like it. And don't worry, I have more future plans for Ray and his amazing pecs.

Anonymous
6/2/24, 5:40 AM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) So glad to hear there will be more of his pecs coming up.
6/1/24, 3:39 PM
Omg so good! Love how Andrew is being punished as the homophobe of the group. Looking forward to seeing how he’s punished moving forward.

6/2/24, 5:19 AM
@[JS Boi](/user/show/10050225) Glad you like Andrew's character. He's definitely the one who I come up with by far the most possibilities for each time his name is brought up. I can assure you he is heavily involved in the second act.
6/1/24, 6:21 AM
The fact that Ty is hypnotized by the Microphone like everyone else is so hot!

6/2/24, 5:14 AM
@[SpiralSlave](/user/show/730746) Thanks for the comment! Yeah, even he can get hypnoTYzed from time to time :grin:
Anonymous
6/2/24, 1:41 AM
Love the start of this new series! Very cool twist to see the submission to the cock itself rather than something inside the sub themselves like your other stories.
6/1/24, 5:59 PM
I wish the story had a bit more Sam Chan (what can I say? Strong, independent Asian characters aren’t depicted too often on here) But make no mistake! You’ve written a top ten on the website! I had to pull out my AP Lit notes, but your portrayal of the dynamics of this group of hunks is amazing. The respect and camaraderie. The great introduction of Carl. (Even if I’m a bit asexual) the scenes of romance between these wonderful lovely hunks All so good! You’ve made Brian a compelling, sympathetic man, and the perfect surrogate for the reader.

6/2/24, 12:58 AM
@[Big Fan](/user/show/10000420) Thanks for the love... personally my big rugby arse has been ridden by enough Sam Chans, that it's only true that he be immortalised. Don't worry, even though he took a little bit of a back seat, he's not done yet
6/2/24, 12:01 AM
Well written and definitely hot. Wondering when we find out what the cause is for the change in him? Seems there are hints that the body has changed and is changing drastically, beyond just working out. But we haven't discovered if it's a drug or something else that's causing all the changes. Especially in regard to his intellect, that seems to be a mystery that even Brian is oblivious to. Thank god for the millions he's come into because if not he'd be in deep shit.

6/2/24, 12:56 AM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) Glad you're loving it. As it's only from Mr Johnsons perspective, not sure if we'll ever know. Maybe somethings were just meant to be...
6/2/24, 12:48 AM
This is Justin’s getting better and better. I love how Bri is such a blissed out botched out muscle beta. With absolutely no will or even know how to say no. But even still, he had a different relationship with everyone: sub, dad, bitch, etc. I also wonder how influential Sam has been not only at the gym but over the whole Johnson family. Did he convince Carl that what he needed was a dominant top who could out three fingers up him without question in public? Come to think of it, did Sam have anything to do with his relationship with Mrs J, or her decision to get a divorce… so that Mr J was available? Again, so hot. It’s a breezy read too and keeps the action going! I wonder if we are going to get any realization from out muscle bitch, or is he just going to remaining a blissfully ignorant fuck object forever.

6/2/24, 12:53 AM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) Mmmm... glad you're loving it. I was going to end the story here, but I've got enough ideas to keep it going, thanks to some suggestions. I'd like to think the Mr Johnson is just enjoying it all, and that it was just the way life was meant to be. And Sam was just what the family needed to find their bliss... but, who knows...
hairyartist
5/31/24, 11:17 AM
Awesome, thank you!

6/1/24, 11:01 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) I’m glad to hear you liked it. Thanks for the feedback
Pax
6/1/24, 10:39 PM
I definitely see a wish cascade coming. Brian will make some kind of wish that Riley will automatically say yes to like ordered, that wish will then cause Riley to make a wish that will affect Brian because Brian didn't think to protect himself from Riley.
6/1/24, 10:15 PM
Rereading this! It's sooo hot! Love the fingering. I bet some rimming would add to the training. But yeah sooo hot!