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Aug 11, 2021
Anonymous
8/11/21, 5:46 PM
Loved this! Ryan was one of my favourite rangers as a teenager so this brought back a lot of old memories… Please tell me there’s going to be a follow up?

6/1/24, 12:43 AM
@Anonymous Probably not but my brain turns randomly so it could happen at some eventual point.
6/1/24, 12:39 AM
I loved it, Chris and Eric are very sexy ♡. I can't wait to read the next episode. please keep writing!
John
5/31/24, 9:13 PM
You are at your best when you write cruel, undeserving changes. Hottest thing you've ever written and I have been a fan since waaaaaay back with the original Asmodeus story beginning
5/30/24, 11:10 PM
Hot! Hot hot hot! Love the premise and look forward to their adventures. Maybe Nick could claim more then one good boy. And Peter can become his brothers best boy. Also the rimming was hot! What a great first chapter.

5/30/24, 11:54 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you for the feedback. Chapter 2 coming soon.

5/31/24, 12:13 AM
@[hmsl](/user/show/72172) As a note, because of how sexy I found this story I went back and read some of your other works. Very hot and sexy. I especially like the presence of both dom (top) and sub (bottom) povs. This switch in points of view is really well done and enjoyable. Oh, I also like how there isn't dumbing down. Its physical and like emotional changes, and straight to gay, but they can still think. Super hot!

5/31/24, 6:03 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed them. Which one stands out as your favorite?

5/31/24, 8:42 PM
@[hmsl](/user/show/72172) So I especially enjoyed the first story of Bodybuilding Temple Brothers, the first in Gay Fairy Tales (I was rooting for a threesome!), the Sigil Ink story, and the Stepping Into Passion story. I liked how it was happy endings and I liked the way things happened. Though the potion one did feel weird in that everyone found the place and such, but it was still a sexy set up! Out of them all honestly I couldn't say which one I liked the most, they each called to me in slightly different ways. Actually, I liked the fitness one and the potions story a bit more than the other too, with the ink after that. Mostly cause I like the 'scientific' element of the first one, the proto stuff in the second (its potions, meaning it could be drugs) and on the fairy tale that was just awww. I also enjoyed the fact that things ended well, it was happy, and that none like lost their jobs or were too dumb to speak or whatever. Things were blissful. Soooo my only thing is I wish there was more rimming. hehe. I do have to admit, as a side note, I liked the 'older guy' in his behavior right before the final potion drinking he did. He was still subby and stuff but he was a bit more manly than boyish pre-final drink. Oh. I liked younger brother dom top over over brother, and 'son' dom top over 'father', so that clicked with me! Sexy stuff. Oh, and this is me, soooo needs more pov rimming of bottom dude scenes. hehe Seriously though, hot and sexy stuff!

5/31/24, 9:10 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you so much for the feedback!
5/31/24, 8:38 PM
I loved _what_ Brian did to these guys, but not _why_ he did it. He's detestable -- actually a turnoff for me, and I wish I hadn't seen into his head. But your writing, as always, is fantastic. Your erotic parts of your stories are so good, and so inventive, it dampens my disgust of Brian a little bit. Still, I honestly wish he weren't part of this story. One of the things I love about wish fulfillment stories in this niche genre is dealing with the consequences of poorly thought out wishes, and so far, the consequences just haven't been that dire. People are getting what they want, even in contradictory ways. Really looking forward to the continuation of this story!

5/31/24, 8:45 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Great response! (You said what I was trying to say much more succinctly). :p I think I would enjoy the story if Brian was not a part of it. But it’s a sign of how good Naedre is that we’re all talking about it!

5/31/24, 8:46 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) This sums up my view pretty well. So I wanted to second it.
5/31/24, 7:25 PM
Absolutely great seeing Brian go full villain! Can't wait to see if his plans for the other guys succeed! I'm hoping he at the least comes out of this with Tyler under his thumb even if Riley manages to get free and the other guys avoid trouble. Love to watch a bad boy win against a goody twoshoes.
Call me Mr. Zues
5/31/24, 5:36 PM
Who is Zues?
5/31/24, 4:36 PM
This was the hottest one yet. Cant wait for more
5/31/24, 4:26 PM
Damn, you have to hope that the House doesn't twist that last wish. "My master" is open ended, and "protected from" are ripe for abuse by a genie (even if the house doesn't generally seem to work like that).
5/31/24, 4:16 PM
This is an incredible work, scorching hot, great characterization. Keep it up!!