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5/31/24, 8:38 PM
I loved _what_ Brian did to these guys, but not _why_ he did it. He's detestable -- actually a turnoff for me, and I wish I hadn't seen into his head. But your writing, as always, is fantastic. Your erotic parts of your stories are so good, and so inventive, it dampens my disgust of Brian a little bit. Still, I honestly wish he weren't part of this story. One of the things I love about wish fulfillment stories in this niche genre is dealing with the consequences of poorly thought out wishes, and so far, the consequences just haven't been that dire. People are getting what they want, even in contradictory ways. Really looking forward to the continuation of this story!

5/31/24, 8:45 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Great response! (You said what I was trying to say much more succinctly). :p I think I would enjoy the story if Brian was not a part of it. But it’s a sign of how good Naedre is that we’re all talking about it!

5/31/24, 8:46 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) This sums up my view pretty well. So I wanted to second it.
5/31/24, 7:25 PM
Absolutely great seeing Brian go full villain! Can't wait to see if his plans for the other guys succeed! I'm hoping he at the least comes out of this with Tyler under his thumb even if Riley manages to get free and the other guys avoid trouble. Love to watch a bad boy win against a goody twoshoes.
Call me Mr. Zues
5/31/24, 5:36 PM
Who is Zues?
5/31/24, 4:36 PM
This was the hottest one yet. Cant wait for more
5/31/24, 4:26 PM
Damn, you have to hope that the House doesn't twist that last wish. "My master" is open ended, and "protected from" are ripe for abuse by a genie (even if the house doesn't generally seem to work like that).
5/31/24, 4:16 PM
This is an incredible work, scorching hot, great characterization. Keep it up!!
5/31/24, 3:33 PM
If Brian does lose (in at least one ending, if there's an alternate path too) it should be by having his self-delusions collapse leaving him a bawling mess where he's no longer able to hide from his deeper feelings, with his paper-thin superficial alpha nature stripped away. I'm not sure if it was your intention to make him more of a monster with the "I'll never be vulnerable" stuff but instead of making me hate him more it made me basically want the house to be his genie-therapist ;)
5/31/24, 11:56 AM
Well, that was amazing. The Axel scene was super hot. Thanks, Jack!

5/31/24, 3:16 PM
@[Lloyd311](/user/show/13481) thanks bud
5/31/24, 8:17 AM
And Mercury, the M in Shazam’s name is a Roman God. The comic books, which this is based on, mix the two liberally. It’s why it’s a comic book and not a mythology lesson.

5/31/24, 1:11 PM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) That's very true however Aquaman has the staff of "Poseidon" not "Neptune". If you asked an ancient greek and an ancient Roman neither would dare say Poseidon is the same god as Neptune because one of them would be a false god.

5/31/24, 3:03 PM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) This has nothing to do with porn, but I can't help but respond to this - that assertion is absolutely, 100% wrong. There is no such thing as a "false god" in classical paganism. That's just anachronistically applying Christian concepts. If anything, the opposite -- Greeks and Romans considered all deities to be true and thought they were all more or less approximations of one another: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interpretatio_graeca So, Poseidon **is** Neptune, pretty much. "Different names for different people," as the Wikipedia entry says, quoting Pliny the Elder. Especially since the Romans deliberately associated their gods with specific Greek deities - the correspondences are ones they came up with themselves.
hairyartist
5/31/24, 2:34 PM
Awesome, thank you~~!!