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mic
5/26/24, 7:03 PM
so hot, please more of this story, hope he gets them both and lock them in chasity
mic
5/26/24, 6:51 PM
fucking hot story, please more like that
5/26/24, 4:52 AM
Looking forward to it. 😈 I imagine the next interactions will give us some valuable insights as well...

5/26/24, 6:32 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) The next chapter gets into some strong bdsm, so hopefully people enjoy it. It's actually made me consider writing a grounded in reality bdsm story. So if that's something people would be interested in let me know.
5/25/24, 12:34 PM
Absolutely fantastic!

5/26/24, 6:30 PM
@[Kelly](/user/show/933626) Thank you!
5/24/24, 8:39 PM
This story is almost... wholesome in a really perverse way :rofl: The characterisation, pacing and plot are all solid, i'm very curious how this will all end (on chapter 100 if i had my way)

5/26/24, 6:30 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) I'm so glad you're enjoying it! We will see how far we go! I'm not sure I can make it to 100 but it's definitely one of the longest things I've ever written. Even if this one doesn't go on forever there are more stories and more people for John to play with.
Zander
5/26/24, 3:21 PM
Great story, interesting to watch James's decline. The only negative of the story is that James is a bit of a stupid character (since he can’t put two and two together and understand) that the cigars and the store where he was are to blame for everything.It's strange that he didn't suspect anything and doesn't try to just leave and live somewhere else. Since the degradation is very slow, and not fast, and it is unclear that he still has not understood anything).
5/26/24, 2:23 PM
Hot as fuck!
Anonymous
5/26/24, 9:52 AM
...Wow. Where to start with this? First of all, if I were an eccentric billionaire-slash-supervillain(and also living in this fictional universe), I can say with 100% certainty that I'd immediately want to add that exquisite "sculpture" to my collection. Alas, my imagination will have to suffice...for now. This story has definitely been a rollercoaster ride from beginning to end, and there were admittedly bits in the middle where I lost interest, but I'd say this is a strong finish! I particularly liked Henry's final rubber suit. And I completely agree with the other comments that everyone ended up in a good place. More specifically, I can't picture things looking unrecognizably different for Henry and Nick even if they prevail in the other ending. Sure, they might end up "freer" there, but...if they end up doing most of the same things to each other anyway, how much does it really matter? To be totally honest, I'm a little surprised that this counts as a "bad ending" by your standards! The others were just *so* dark that I frankly had a difficult time enjoying them very much. I hope that doesn't mean the "good ending" will be overly saccharine! I think my only major criticisms of this chapter would be one, we didn't get one last juicy scene of Nick really lording over Henry, and two, there wasn't much detail on what happened to the rest of the drones. I'd be disappointed if one or both of those went unaddressed in the "canon" ending!

5/26/24, 1:40 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. You're right that this 'bad' ending isn't as dark as any of the others. This could also be seen as 'Hank's' ending, so it isn't as messed up as those of some of the other 'villains'. The 'good' ending will be a 'Henry and Nick' ending that should cover any remaining questions. There are things that were deliberately brushed over, like how Carl's mind got back into the state it was in before he's captured here, that are directly addressed in the other ending and the fates of some characters who didn't get any focus in the 'bad' ending are also on the table. Thanks again, and I hope you also enjoy the 'good' ending when it's done!
5/26/24, 1:16 PM
Thankyou for adding another chapter.
Anonymous
5/26/24, 1:11 PM
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