Recent Comments

Art
5/26/24, 7:52 PM
I love this whole series and keep hoping the story will continue so we can learn what transpires with the cop who arrived at the house.
5/26/24, 7:49 PM
Hell yeah, what a fun chapter! 😈😈😈
Anonymous
5/26/24, 7:27 PM
good start!
5/26/24, 7:15 PM
Hell yeah! So hot!
mic
5/26/24, 7:03 PM
so hot, please more of this story, hope he gets them both and lock them in chasity
mic
5/26/24, 6:51 PM
fucking hot story, please more like that
5/26/24, 4:52 AM
Looking forward to it. 😈 I imagine the next interactions will give us some valuable insights as well...

5/26/24, 6:32 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) The next chapter gets into some strong bdsm, so hopefully people enjoy it. It's actually made me consider writing a grounded in reality bdsm story. So if that's something people would be interested in let me know.
5/25/24, 12:34 PM
Absolutely fantastic!

5/26/24, 6:30 PM
@[Kelly](/user/show/933626) Thank you!
5/24/24, 8:39 PM
This story is almost... wholesome in a really perverse way :rofl: The characterisation, pacing and plot are all solid, i'm very curious how this will all end (on chapter 100 if i had my way)

5/26/24, 6:30 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) I'm so glad you're enjoying it! We will see how far we go! I'm not sure I can make it to 100 but it's definitely one of the longest things I've ever written. Even if this one doesn't go on forever there are more stories and more people for John to play with.
Zander
5/26/24, 3:21 PM
Great story, interesting to watch James's decline. The only negative of the story is that James is a bit of a stupid character (since he can’t put two and two together and understand) that the cigars and the store where he was are to blame for everything.It's strange that he didn't suspect anything and doesn't try to just leave and live somewhere else. Since the degradation is very slow, and not fast, and it is unclear that he still has not understood anything).