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Anonymous
5/26/24, 9:52 AM
...Wow. Where to start with this? First of all, if I were an eccentric billionaire-slash-supervillain(and also living in this fictional universe), I can say with 100% certainty that I'd immediately want to add that exquisite "sculpture" to my collection. Alas, my imagination will have to suffice...for now. This story has definitely been a rollercoaster ride from beginning to end, and there were admittedly bits in the middle where I lost interest, but I'd say this is a strong finish! I particularly liked Henry's final rubber suit. And I completely agree with the other comments that everyone ended up in a good place. More specifically, I can't picture things looking unrecognizably different for Henry and Nick even if they prevail in the other ending. Sure, they might end up "freer" there, but...if they end up doing most of the same things to each other anyway, how much does it really matter? To be totally honest, I'm a little surprised that this counts as a "bad ending" by your standards! The others were just *so* dark that I frankly had a difficult time enjoying them very much. I hope that doesn't mean the "good ending" will be overly saccharine! I think my only major criticisms of this chapter would be one, we didn't get one last juicy scene of Nick really lording over Henry, and two, there wasn't much detail on what happened to the rest of the drones. I'd be disappointed if one or both of those went unaddressed in the "canon" ending!

5/26/24, 1:40 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. You're right that this 'bad' ending isn't as dark as any of the others. This could also be seen as 'Hank's' ending, so it isn't as messed up as those of some of the other 'villains'. The 'good' ending will be a 'Henry and Nick' ending that should cover any remaining questions. There are things that were deliberately brushed over, like how Carl's mind got back into the state it was in before he's captured here, that are directly addressed in the other ending and the fates of some characters who didn't get any focus in the 'bad' ending are also on the table. Thanks again, and I hope you also enjoy the 'good' ending when it's done!
5/26/24, 1:16 PM
Thankyou for adding another chapter.
Anonymous
5/26/24, 1:11 PM
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5/26/24, 11:22 AM
this story is fantastic!!
5/26/24, 8:48 AM
I love a slow burn, watching the doubt and desires piling on. It makes the eventual pay off so much sweeter.
5/26/24, 8:25 AM
Is everything ok? Will this story be completed?
5/26/24, 6:04 AM
Great Story. Cańt weit to see the Rest of the transformation. Like your other stories as well. Incredible transformations..
5/26/24, 5:25 AM
I just wanted to say this is possibly my favorite story of all time on this site. I feel like a sequel is not out of the realm of possibilities, so I'm keeping my fingers crossed!
5/26/24, 5:21 AM
I love the originality associated with some of these hot triggers. Smearing jizz on your face as camouflage! Brilliant!
5/26/24, 4:50 AM
I think this story is very hot and I would love to be caught by the rubber android. Don't worry about your English it makes perfect sense to me. I'd love to hear more chapters.