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6/15/25, 4:18 PM
make me wanna cum
6/15/25, 2:29 PM
that is kind of messed up, she transfoemrd her own son, who I think was an okay guy, she is like Naru from love hina, a woman who assumes the worst of every men and uses it as an excuse to harm them

6/15/25, 4:17 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Hehe that is exactly the reaction i was hoping for!
6/15/25, 4:12 PM
A hot story
6/15/25, 3:52 PM
Don’t be hard on yourself. Very interesting start. I hope you continue. I’m invested in Amet already.
6/15/25, 3:16 PM
Hot as hell! Could be longer, but I love what you’re doing here!
6/15/25, 12:01 PM
This 👏 is 👏 phenomenal! 👏 You should be so proud that your first story is this good! And not only because you hit so many of my fave kinks. Great pacing, character "growth", plot, everything. Would love if there's another chapter in this. Either way, I'll be looking out for more of your writing! 🥵

6/15/25, 2:37 PM
@[DorothyZbornak](/user/show/977065) Thank you for the praise! I do plan on there being a sequel to this sometime in the future. I’ve got a couple ideas floating around.
Anonymous
6/15/25, 2:36 PM
Hot and funny -- hotter because funny. It reminds me of the scene in Madame Bovary that cuts back and forth between an intimate seduction and the announcement awards at a rural agricultural fair.
6/15/25, 2:29 PM
Between the accepting dad, supporting twin brother, and now the mysterious crush this is just too sweet. Can't wait to see what's next!
Art
6/15/25, 2:07 PM
We've been waiting months for the continuation - please? I hate unfinished stories after they've lured you in.