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6/15/25, 3:16 PM
Hot as hell! Could be longer, but I love what you’re doing here!
6/15/25, 12:01 PM
This 👏 is 👏 phenomenal! 👏 You should be so proud that your first story is this good! And not only because you hit so many of my fave kinks. Great pacing, character "growth", plot, everything. Would love if there's another chapter in this. Either way, I'll be looking out for more of your writing! 🥵

6/15/25, 2:37 PM
@[DorothyZbornak](/user/show/977065) Thank you for the praise! I do plan on there being a sequel to this sometime in the future. I’ve got a couple ideas floating around.
Anonymous
6/15/25, 2:36 PM
Hot and funny -- hotter because funny. It reminds me of the scene in Madame Bovary that cuts back and forth between an intimate seduction and the announcement awards at a rural agricultural fair.
6/15/25, 2:29 PM
Between the accepting dad, supporting twin brother, and now the mysterious crush this is just too sweet. Can't wait to see what's next!
Art
6/15/25, 2:07 PM
We've been waiting months for the continuation - please? I hate unfinished stories after they've lured you in.
6/15/25, 11:00 AM
I can very much tell this was a labor of love for you -- love of the genre, love of the characters, love of the storytelling -- and it shows in every word of this doorstop comic story. Not going to lie, would have enjoyed it very much in comic book form too!

6/15/25, 12:47 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I'd love to see it that way! Actually, see the characters as I imagine them. Thanks so much for the comment....
6/15/25, 12:23 PM
this is beautiful

6/15/25, 12:43 PM
@[mutak](/user/show/952269) Wow...thank you...thank you so much.
nycboot
6/15/25, 6:21 AM
The transformation scenes of so many stories go too smoothly. What is so unique and wonderful about this story (and your concept and your writing) is that we see Justin struggling against what we know (and hope) is inevitable. To me, this is the best part of any story - the slow and deliberate struggle that a victim makes. It's also part of character delineation for the stronger the struggle, the more intentional will be the acceptance and growth of the transformed. Kudos for a wonderful story.
Titan
6/15/25, 5:50 AM
This is so hot Can’t believe I’ve never read it before. Thanks to @nycboot and his favourite stories list.
6/15/25, 5:36 AM
Great Story!