Recent Comments

5/24/24, 10:31 AM
Hot as fuck. Is this the end of the line, or is more coming yet as Johnny realizes his place is at Eden getting passed around by the jocks there (instead of playing football for A&M)?

5/24/24, 10:34 AM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) Oh no, far from over :)
5/24/24, 10:27 AM
Please tell me this isn't the last chapter!!! I'm DIEING to read John's perspective on their trip where Sammy apologizes to him.

5/24/24, 10:34 AM
@[Mr.Doubtfier](/user/show/10036330) Far from over, we still have to get John caught up to real time with Sammy and Eden :)
Anon
5/24/24, 9:59 AM
I know it’s too late but the airport/airplane setting and experience was a lost opportunity! Enjoying everything else though.
Anonymous
5/24/24, 7:22 AM
Thanks for the second chapter. Surprisingly, imagining an ugly boy with massive pecs is far more of a turn-on than just a perfect guy. Keep going. I hope you get all the encouragement you need.
5/23/24, 12:33 AM
Wow, loved this story! Would definitely love to read the original!

5/24/24, 5:37 AM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I'm a little embarrassed about the original one but I'll check about publishing it here too. It's original title was "El Asistente de Mago"!

5/24/24, 6:06 AM
@[CyanideT](/user/show/2232547) No worries, I'm sure it's just as great! Just found it and can't wait to read!
5/23/24, 11:08 PM
Hell yeah!

5/24/24, 5:38 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) 😁
5/23/24, 8:47 PM
Really well done! Imaginative, hot, and a great read.

5/24/24, 5:38 AM
@[Scott](/user/show/459693) Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it!
5/23/24, 11:23 PM
Just love this story, about an evil clown that controls men by draining their minds, and will out through their cocks. Hope in the next chapters that Chubbers gets his revenge on Jefford, and Kushkyn. And that we learn what happened to Deputy Tomlins. I look forward to future chapters of series.
5/23/24, 8:02 PM
Very hot. You write sex really well. And the small hints of Bri’s new-found beta thoughts are great, the way they just creep in here and there, without him noticing. Clearly, (or it was clear to me) given how quickly and effortlessly all the boys hopped-to when Sam called to introduce Brian, they are also under his control. He has them working as strippers as well. Will you ever come back to this? Does Sam or has Sam ever done anything sexual with them? Different flavors of kink? Ever have them have sex with each other? And what would Sam do if Carl came into the mix.

5/23/24, 8:08 PM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) There are two more chapters, next one out on the 27th. You'll find out everything very, very soon

Anonymous
5/23/24, 11:19 PM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362) Can’t wait. Then of course there are Cheryl and Mr. And Mrs. Chan themselves. Seems like Sam has been busy on this town!
sweetling
5/23/24, 11:18 PM
oh my god PLEASE that was amazing!!! would love to see how the father's doing....