Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/16/24, 9:16 PM
wow this is hot is there going to be more chapters?

5/23/24, 4:40 PM
@Anonymous Just submitted the next chapter today!
5/23/24, 3:22 PM
Loving the story. One of my favorite thing is completely changing a guy from in control to slutty himbo. Even love the handsfree orgasms which Brian is having and the need to have his pussy filled . For a guy who was very shy seeing him go to the gym with cum in him...is delicious. Also hope his clothes in gym and other places are very revealing..Cant wait for the next chapter

5/23/24, 3:52 PM
@[sammyryan9](/user/show/10006030) Glad you're loving it man. Next chapter out on the 27th... and yeah Mr Johnson has happily embraced little rugby shorts and stringer vests... and not just at the gym
5/23/24, 12:03 PM
Like your transformations, can't want for more
5/23/24, 11:51 AM
This is incredibly hot. The writing is terrific, and every scene drips with sex. Matt's resistance - and eventual submission - feel totally real.
5/23/24, 10:19 AM
So glad to see this one come back. I hope there’s not as long of a wait til part 3!
5/23/24, 8:34 AM
So grateful to see a new piece from you.
Anonymous
5/23/24, 3:31 AM
Great writing! I hope we get quite a few chapters from you fleshing out the characters and the power dynamics they share. It'd be a shame for such good writing to end abruptly. Anyway, 11/10. Can't wait to see the next chapter!

5/23/24, 5:52 AM
@Anonymous Glad you liked it. Next chapter chapter due on the 27th
5/22/24, 4:02 PM
This was really hot. I like that the transformation slowly keeps going past when I expected it to stop, amping things up.

5/23/24, 5:03 AM
@[Gorbant](/user/show/927166) Thank you!
Feb 17, 2024
Anonymous
5/23/24, 4:55 AM
We need more parts to this story Hot!!!
5/23/24, 4:21 AM
Teasing the decline at the end… About to get spicy🔥🔥🔥 So glad this is continuing!