Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/23/24, 3:31 AM
Great writing! I hope we get quite a few chapters from you fleshing out the characters and the power dynamics they share. It'd be a shame for such good writing to end abruptly. Anyway, 11/10. Can't wait to see the next chapter!

5/23/24, 5:52 AM
@Anonymous Glad you liked it. Next chapter chapter due on the 27th
5/22/24, 4:02 PM
This was really hot. I like that the transformation slowly keeps going past when I expected it to stop, amping things up.

5/23/24, 5:03 AM
@[Gorbant](/user/show/927166) Thank you!
Feb 17, 2024
Anonymous
5/23/24, 4:55 AM
We need more parts to this story Hot!!!
5/23/24, 4:21 AM
Teasing the decline at the end… About to get spicy🔥🔥🔥 So glad this is continuing!
5/23/24, 4:05 AM
A really solid idea. I'm glad to see you continuing with this.
5/23/24, 3:48 AM
That was great. Well written. I do hope he gave him a litter :smirk:
5/16/24, 5:34 AM
I really enjoyed it. The concept is arousing and you've done a great job letting those elements unfold. I enjoyed Boyd's point of view when he returned to find Travis taken into transformation. I like the Clay side story and when he turned I thought it was super sudden but sexy. Also the remaining teammates witnessing the former teammates fucking others into thier transformations was totally turning me on. Plus the plot of the scientist being mildly infected to drive the next part of the story is thrilling. I can't wait for more chapters to cum and see what else you have in store.

5/23/24, 3:32 AM
@KhrizzzToePhur Thanks being working on the third chapter, I haven’t finished cause I’ve been busy with normal boring stuff but hopefully you’ll soon seem it
Anonymous
5/22/24, 11:51 PM
Loved Ray’s section. Hope there’s more pec-tacular things to come from him and his long term pec flex.
Anonymous
5/22/24, 11:33 PM
Just a little close to home. Exceptionally hot, thank you can't wait to read more.