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May 14, 2024
5/20/24, 3:46 PM
Nice little story.
Anonymous
5/20/24, 11:53 AM
Hot concept and interactions too. I like that we don’t know why our main character remains unaffected! A follow up would be interesting…

5/20/24, 3:45 PM
Thank you for reading!
5/20/24, 2:38 PM
Really liking this series. Keep it up
12/31/23, 2:41 PM
Very much enjoyed the story for the most part. Very well written, though the second chapter started off being extremely exposition heavy. But I don't think I can enjoy being reminded of the creepy, negative things about mind control and then being told it's ok now because the controller made sure to make them like it. With how well you described the emotions the dad felt during the first chapter I was kind of hoping Casper would get the tables turned on him. All in all I enjoyed it though, so I'm off to check out more of your stories.

5/20/24, 1:45 PM
@[Thanatos1320](/user/show/959936) Sorry for the belated comment, I read it late at night and then ended up forgetting about it until I was going through some of my stories just now. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the story! As far as it being okay just because the controller made them like it, in a way, I suppose you're right, but it was intended to be a bit deeper than that. I was trying to convey that even in a deeply polarized relationship like this, the Dom has a responsibility for the emotional health of his subs, and it was part of Casper's growing up to realize that while he'd been given an enormous gift with what the pendant allowed him to do, it also came with enormous responsibility. If he should ever leave the relationship again, or if something should happen to him, the full understanding of what happened and what they were all doing together will return, so unless he wants to watch the suicidal depression return, he's with them for the rest of their lives.
Bigguy
5/20/24, 12:58 PM
Always wanted to be a big mature gay bear so love the story
May 5, 2024
Anonymous
5/20/24, 11:38 AM
Hot alien infection story. Here’s hoping we here more about the spread of the slugs!
Apr 6, 2024
Anonymous
5/20/24, 10:48 AM
Hot!
Anonymous
5/20/24, 10:27 AM
Hot! Loved Elijah slow corruption and transformation; along with the rest of the home. So glad we’ve had another chapter of this tale!
5/20/24, 10:03 AM
Your mind is sexy ASF man. Not to sound weird, but when I read your stories I feel a deep part of me connected to them. It goes beyond simple relatability or even erotica. Please keep writing 🥺
Zander
5/20/24, 9:28 AM
The idea of the story is not bad, but the story needs to be longer and the characters better written in order to understand their motives, fears and desires. So that they have their own personalities and special characteristics, so that it is possible to empathize with them. We also need to reveal Sean, who is he? Why does he do this and what exactly does he want to achieve? What goals does it pursue in the future? Yes, I understand, this is your first time writing, and especially since you are a foreigner like me. But you need to take these facts into account and solve many issues in order to get a completely good story. It’s better to write a long and well-developed story once a month than to post short stories in parts, where the idea of the story will be interesting, but everything will be poorly implemented in the end. Yes, and it would be nice if the story wasn’t clichéd and that the main antagonist had a counterbalance to the main character.