Recent Comments

5/20/24, 10:03 AM
Your mind is sexy ASF man. Not to sound weird, but when I read your stories I feel a deep part of me connected to them. It goes beyond simple relatability or even erotica. Please keep writing 🥺
Zander
5/20/24, 9:28 AM
The idea of the story is not bad, but the story needs to be longer and the characters better written in order to understand their motives, fears and desires. So that they have their own personalities and special characteristics, so that it is possible to empathize with them. We also need to reveal Sean, who is he? Why does he do this and what exactly does he want to achieve? What goals does it pursue in the future? Yes, I understand, this is your first time writing, and especially since you are a foreigner like me. But you need to take these facts into account and solve many issues in order to get a completely good story. It’s better to write a long and well-developed story once a month than to post short stories in parts, where the idea of the story will be interesting, but everything will be poorly implemented in the end. Yes, and it would be nice if the story wasn’t clichéd and that the main antagonist had a counterbalance to the main character.
mic
5/20/24, 8:27 AM
wow great. more tricking hypno and rivals storys, love when rival sportlers or buissness men fuck or lock the other, or cashrape
Anonymous
5/20/24, 7:59 AM
Love the story and I hope you one day revisit it.
5/20/24, 6:57 AM
Finally, someone touched the moral implications of mind control, and you did it in such a classy, fantastic way! This was not only really well-written but the entire premise shows there was thought put into it beyond mere revenge, while ending it in a wholesome way that does not sound unrealistic. Amazing job, simply fantastic!
5/20/24, 6:06 AM
so fucking hot
5/20/24, 5:52 AM
So so great. I always look forward to a new story from you. Do you ever do commissions?
May 14, 2024
5/20/24, 3:43 AM
Love a good findom story!

Fred
5/20/24, 4:21 AM
@[Praxidice](/user/show/1236261) Thanks!
5/20/24, 4:10 AM
Hot
Willie Cici
5/20/24, 2:21 AM
I loved this story. I read it twice just in case I missed anything. The comments above are all on point. Keep writing! You have a knack.