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Rayford
5/19/24, 1:42 PM
Some of you are missing the point. This is just an incredibly hot fantasy. It is not racist - it is not saying that all Arab roommates would be this way. I check for the next chapter every day. Please continue the story!
5/19/24, 1:11 PM
WOW! This is REALLY GOOD READING! I am IN!
5/19/24, 12:51 PM
That was a pleasure to read. You are a great writer!
Anonym
5/18/24, 5:32 PM
OH THAT'S SUCH A GOOD STORY!! Love how you've written it, love that Blake has a conscience and I love that they get a happy ending. Amazing story. I will definetly be re-reading that one in the future.

5/19/24, 12:13 PM
@[Anonym](/user/show/1317836) Thank you! To be honest, I’m not sure he actually did develop a conscience - he didn’t actually let them go, after all. I suspect it’s more likely he was just scared about the depth of his feelings for Trent and the fact that he didn’t think they would be returned, and so pushed him away and then rationalised his behaviour by saying that it was him trying to do “the right thing”. If you’d prefer to think he has a conscience you can - once it’s published, it’s out for all to interpret.
5/19/24, 10:23 AM
You are one of the best new writers on the site.:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: This was super-well written and super-sexy. I was worried about the romance aspect when the guy started as an hypnotized slave, but you really managed to make it work and belivable those two fell in love. :green_heart:

5/19/24, 12:08 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thank you! To be honest, I didn’t approach it thinking that it would be romantic - right up until the third scene I honestly thought it was going somewhere totally different, but the characters disagreed, I guess 😂
Limbo
5/19/24, 10:44 AM
Such a wonderful story. I hope you keep making stories like this and the other story you did, "Many Names, One Name". I love how you characterize each individuals in the story.
5/19/24, 7:51 AM
Another great story! The way you write the slaves is amazing. I love how they justify what’s been done to them. I’m a fan already and hope you write more!
5/19/24, 6:41 AM
Great to see a continuation of this story and hope there's more to come! Would be interesting to see how Dave looks shrunk down to a pipsqueak chav lad apprentice. Or maybe someone comes looking for him and Bill gives them a makeover too!
5/19/24, 2:56 AM
Oh wow, i did not expect to love this story but i did. I love that Brent have his Himbos their own personality even though they are his hypnotized himbos. Hope this story have continuation.
Anonymous
5/19/24, 1:34 AM
I wonder if the author is one of those white europeans that are terrified of muslim immigrants coming to their country and this is how he's sublimating it