Recent Comments

5/19/24, 6:21 PM
Great start! Really looking forward to the continuation.
5/19/24, 6:07 PM
Great chapter, very excited for more! Hope him and Josue spend more time together
5/19/24, 5:42 PM
Incredibly hot chapter! I’m so invested in this.
5/19/24, 2:54 PM
Such a good story, has to be a huge mind-fuck to be the only one to see something like that. Here's hoping to see more of this sometime~
Anonymous
5/19/24, 2:49 PM
Will there be anymore updates? This story is so hot!!!
5/19/24, 2:20 PM
If he is going to become more of a chav or scally twink, I think Dave should become Davy and clearly a submissive bottom.
5/19/24, 1:59 PM
I can’t believe I missed this when it came out! The descriptions of the dicks, the cum inflation, the sleazy hypersexual atmosphere… loved it.
5/19/24, 12:23 AM
Rubbrsome, I've been a big fan of your stories for a long time. One of my favorite hypno writers. The Male Order has a deeply dreamlike quality to it- an erotic nightmare. While I have my own qualms with AI art, I have to admit that the images you used in the story help contribute to the surreal, fluid tone of the story- male shapes flowing and warping in ways that are strange, but not unrecognizable. Bustard's generations capture a deeply erotic element of the transhuman, of the inhuman. My mind says no, but another part of me says "yes, yes, yes!"

5/19/24, 1:42 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Thank you for the amazing compliment. When I first stumbled across BVSTARD's images, my mind was blown. I desperately wanted to incorporate his art into one of my stories. It was simply because I had never seen imagery (from film, TV, print, photo, or any type of media) that got close to what I was envisioning inside my mind. The way you described "male shapes flowing and warping in ways that are strange ..." is a great description of that scenarios that are happening inside my imagination. And BVSTARD's art is the closest I've seen that touches my imagination. So OF COURSE I had to contact him, get permission and write a story. It wasn't hard in writing. His imagery instantly got my ideas churning. And I was very pleased with the results. I'm so glad you succumbed and have that desire to say "yes, yes, yes!"
Rayford
5/19/24, 1:42 PM
Some of you are missing the point. This is just an incredibly hot fantasy. It is not racist - it is not saying that all Arab roommates would be this way. I check for the next chapter every day. Please continue the story!
5/19/24, 1:11 PM
WOW! This is REALLY GOOD READING! I am IN!