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5/18/24, 1:19 AM
I love this chapter. The mythology mixed with the hypersexuality of the Coins and Jasper getting some level of balance with the conflict in him of obeying the implanted programming while also being himself pleases Rhys. That's a powerful moment to read. Also, hot sex and Jasper flipping the script to surprise a few Coins and delight all of them. He's so charming. Nova's counterpoint by providing, essentially, Jasper's old perspective is also wonderfully weaved in to add a tension and dynamic that feels three dimensional. Even we aren't sure just how much of this new life is really Jasper anymore. But, I think his feelings for Rhys are real so I am hanging out for a compromise between who he was and his old life and friends and who he is becoming. Also, having the Golden Lattice as an actual game to play is super cool! Another magnificent chapter re-worked into an even tighter well-paced piece of character, horniness, and plot. <3
5/18/24, 12:53 AM
This is so so so so SO FUCKING GOOD!
5/18/24, 12:03 AM
SO GOOD!!!!!!!!

5/18/24, 12:34 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thanks! :3 I really wanted to do Hank some justice in this ending, so I hope that came through! Apologies for the long wait. The alternate-final chapter should be done in a week or so.
5/18/24, 12:30 AM
I really love this series. It's romantic and very hot. I love the mission to try to stop Riley. Though, it's really Brian they have to stop since he controls Riley. Noah still has his wish. Then again, if Riley can't hear the command, or is gagged and can't speak the wish clearly... The eternal fucking solution was great and I look forward how the boys work out this next one. Even if it's just a "delay of a day" before they aren't gay any more. Great writing, thank you for posting more chapters of this story. It's enjoyable and I delight in seeing a new chapter.
5/17/24, 11:39 PM
Woah, i knew there would be an attachment with Noah and Joe. Damn, Tyler being involved with them is better and hotter than the toxic couple because of Brian. I mean, if Brian is not involved, Riley and Tyler are hot together. So to track day 2, theres only two wishes granted yet. What kind of complications would be the 3 three other wishes bring? Cant wait.
5/17/24, 10:34 PM
We want another chapter!
5/17/24, 10:19 PM
Good start
5/17/24, 8:50 PM
This looks to become very interesting!
5/17/24, 8:30 PM
What was Noah’s second wish?

5/17/24, 8:49 PM
@[TC04](/user/show/1195593) Not made yet. Prior to Tyler's help, he was too distracted and too tired to think of a solution. Stay tuned for next chapter.
5/17/24, 8:46 PM
Oh man, this story is incredible! So hot throughout! I'm sure this is going to be your best work yet. Please don't let us wait, I have to experience Tyler's conversion!