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5/6/24, 11:22 PM
I already want to see the other Tompson brother and I would like to see Eric in his police suit.

5/16/24, 7:10 PM
@Morbius We will definitely see Eric in his police uniform. I'm currently planning a few scenes for each of them at their places of work. We will eventually meet Peter the older brother. But it's going to be a bit. It's only Saturday evening and he won't be introduced until Monday.
Morbius Dunkey
5/6/24, 11:16 PM
I just read the entire story so far. The truth is that I liked it a lot, everything is very well thought out and now it is one of my favorite erotic sagas with the best script. I love the control that Jhon has over the father and son and the things he forces them to do that they don't like but that they enjoy at the same time. If I had to say only one thing that bothers and disappoints me, it is that the father still has a flabby and old body. I would more like to see Chris as a sexy dilf with a big ass and huge muscular tits. In my opinion, the scene of Chris and his son having sex would have been better this way. If it had been like that from the beginning I would be more excited, like Joe. But I only say this because of my preferences. I actually don't speak English, I'm reading your story thanks to the translator on the page. And this comment is translated from Spanish to English by Google. Sorry if something doesn't make sense, I just wanted to give my opinion. I hope you continue writing more of this erotic story.

5/16/24, 7:07 PM
@Morbius Dunkey It was never my intention to make Chris seem super overweight. I explain it a little more in the next chapter, which is processing right now. I hope everything translates well, I use a lot of sayings and phrases that hopefully translate correctly.
Anonymous
5/16/24, 6:09 PM
Your writing style so great and I love how your stories have actual emotional hooks to them . I just wanted to know if your still continuing your previous knight story

Pcm
5/16/24, 6:16 PM
@Anonymous I will, of course! However, I kinda hit a writer's block for that story. It's a really weird problem. I got the plot figured out, but unable to conjure the hot scenario to accompany it. Well, I actually do have one sex scene that I really want to write about, but it is more towards the end of the story. Actually, this story is meant to be a prequel of sort set in the same universe. It is a much shorter story, and once it is done, I will return to Knightly Duties so that I could finish William's story. Thank you for liking my work!

Anonymous
5/16/24, 6:42 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Also love how your stories have heavy emphasis on family and their love for one another , I just hope both respective families of the two stories have happy ending

Pcm
5/16/24, 6:57 PM
@Anonymous "Happy ending" is awfully relative, isn't it? I am aiming for a "hot" ending, but depending on whom you ask, not everyone will agree that the ending is "happy" (at least, to them.)
5/16/24, 5:16 PM
Turned into shirtless chicken or believing to be a donkey is so hot. Very nice.
abc123
5/16/24, 4:35 PM
So damn hot! Cant wait to see he bottoms!
Anonymous
5/16/24, 2:32 PM
Can’t wait for more of this one 🤤 🤤 🤤
Anonymous
5/16/24, 6:30 AM
I don’t know who I’m more jealous of: Sam or Brian? 😮‍💨

Todd Mitchell
5/16/24, 6:49 AM
@Anonymous yessss... author very happy if I can keep you hard from two perspectives.

Anonymous
5/16/24, 6:57 AM
@Todd Mitchell Also. Totally get it’s a fine line to balance on. But love that Sam’s last name is Chan

Todd Mitchell
5/16/24, 8:12 AM
@Anonymous Hot muscle boys of Chinese/Singaporean origin have always been one (of many) types that I love. And there was a cute gym buddy with his bouncy attitude and always calling me Mr that I really wanted to capture in this story.

Anonymous
5/16/24, 11:06 AM
@Todd Mitchell Nice! I may share a very similar interest 😅 So looking forward to where you may go next, but this chapter was AMAZING. Question: do you have a method to collect any additional feedback or comments? Email/Twitter/Tumblr/Telegraph for example

Todd Mitchell
5/16/24, 12:19 PM
@Anonymous drop me a line @gayjockgeek on X.

Anonymous
5/16/24, 12:33 PM
@Todd Mitchell Looks like your DM’s are disabled from the general public. You may need to update a setting to allow DM’s from anyone. Else you need to follow the person for them to message you

5/16/24, 2:04 PM
@Anonymous Ah. Learn something every day. OK I fixed it so you can message me
5/15/24, 10:41 PM
Do you mean to have this tagged as "#gay to straight"? Just doesn't seem like the story has any of those elements - if anything I'd say it's more "Straight to Bi". Great chapter btw, I can't wait to read how this continues

Todd Mitchell
5/16/24, 6:47 AM
@[AnonDragon](/user/show/247680) is there a straight to bi tag? Gosh I must have missed that. Will try and find it and add it in. Though from a marketing perspective straight to gay is more attractive... How much cock does a dude need to take to tip it over from bi to gay I wonder. He he

5/16/24, 12:40 PM
@Todd Mitchell straight-2-gay is fine, of course, but you seem to have tagged your story with the opposite, gay-2-straight, which is generally scoffed at for obvious reasons (conversion therapy...). That might have been an unintended mistake and it would certainly have the effect of turning many potential readers away from your story!

Todd Mitchell
5/16/24, 1:28 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Hmm.. that wasn't me. I think I saw someone change it and I wasn't playing close attention. Thanks for flagging!
5/16/24, 1:17 PM
What a sweet ending with a really sexy induction/corruption arc! Personally wish it had gotten more explicit, but there was some heartwarming innocence to it as is. Great writing, thanks for sharing your work.
5/16/24, 1:07 PM
😈😈😈😈