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5/15/24, 2:10 AM
The transformation continues!

5/15/24, 9:02 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Nowhere left to go but down.
5/15/24, 8:20 PM
A-MAZ-ING! # :sparkling_heart:

5/15/24, 8:57 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Thank you, Corin!
5/15/24, 7:43 PM
Very nice. Keep up the great writing. But I think it is time to get real kinky with this boy. Let's not forget he has two brothers he might want to message about.
5/15/24, 7:11 PM
Heheh. I like this story. Simple wish fulfilment is sometimes great. It reminds me of some of my regular fantasies, really (though I'd go in a very different, more rubbery direction ;) ) Looking forward to what else you come up with. It makes me think of some of the CYOC stories, so I definitely hope you'll open it up when you're done :P
Anonymous
5/15/24, 6:37 PM
SO FUCKING HOT! I ow great idea and writing!
Zander
5/15/24, 6:01 PM
Thank you very much for the chapter. A story with potential for continuation.
5/15/24, 5:29 PM
I'm loving it. That's what I would do if I had my own ChatRPT :-) Keep this story going. Perhaps there will be some accidental orgasms in the future storyline (because of typos in ChatRPT).
5/14/24, 1:48 PM
This was rather annoying to read. The paragraph construction was too similar from each other. The repeated use of "stark reminder" Was too much across the entire thing, really. It would have been nice to see the gradual stripping of the slave's identity but the way you did it made it seem like he's just repeating himself instead of convincing himself (and us) that accepting it was the best way out.

5/15/24, 8:01 AM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) Yeah, this is my first doing a story, so I am learning

5/15/24, 4:34 PM
@[Pup Mysterys](/user/show/10025504) I mean, it's great that you're willing to improve but those were the most glaring parts I found. If you do want to use the whole repeating/affirmation style, a good vehicle to convey that is the journal/diary/report format. Like have your MC write in a journal about his experiences and change minor things about the reports while the MC doesn't notice it. I.E: slowly no longer referring to themselves with anything but "It" across the entries, having them cross out certain words like names and info that are "wrong" And etc.
May 14, 2024
5/15/24, 2:29 PM
Very. Very. Hot.

Fred
5/15/24, 3:23 PM
@[JockTopper](/user/show/10015286) Thanks, man. Love your stories so muchm they get me off every time, your feedback means a lot
5/15/24, 12:34 AM
I am really starting to enjoy this story. Loving where this is going and that you are showing us the progression of things. I do wonder if you might post longer entries in the future.

5/15/24, 12:28 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thanks for your reply! I do plan to make longer chapters. The next chapter should be about double the size of the first two.