Recent Comments

5/13/24, 10:05 PM
I'd love to see more, what you did was good but there is so much more to explore.
5/11/24, 4:36 AM
Great start! I'm loving how you're showing the growth of the herd and their changing behavior and clothing. I'm just a little confused about the layout of this town. It's got a coffee shop, bar, and gym all in close walking distance, which would suggest an urban setting. But there's also somehow also a big red barn in walking distance too?

5/13/24, 10:02 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thank you. Love your work! Your feedback is appreciated. I was planning to revisit my story in a couple of days. I have been reading it and noticed some flaws myself as well and I will keep this in mind!
Zander
5/13/24, 9:59 PM
It's good that the book disappears immediately after one use. Thanks to this, no one can have absolute power over everyone, but only over a limited group of people.
5/13/24, 8:31 PM
Awesome hot story!

5/13/24, 8:32 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you! I am glad you liked it!
5/13/24, 8:04 PM
Please give us more!
May 4, 2024
5/13/24, 7:17 PM
Fucking hot as shit, I normally don't love mindwipe stuff but the way you do yours is superb.
hvt
5/13/24, 6:47 PM
Great story. Hope there’s more coming.
5/13/24, 6:36 PM
Great start you can go anywhere with this, looking forward to reading more
5/13/24, 6:20 PM
Can’t wait for the next chapter
Kent
5/13/24, 6:08 PM
I love this start! Would love to see some accidental chastity with himself with or without actually needing a cage.