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May 13, 2024
5/13/24, 11:47 PM
Or some interesting twist of "infection" received by the fucking of the owner. The "first" time could all be a ruse.

5/14/24, 12:21 AM
@[zimdog](/user/show/934645) That would be a pretty compelling continuation, but as this is the second story with the protagonist, the emerging pattern is that the protagonist beats all opposition pretty easily, providing the readers with relatively surface-level smut. Which is fine, and reasonably hot, but doesn't really lend itself to twists.

5/14/24, 12:44 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Missed the first one.....going back now. Perhaps he will "meet his match" at some point. Fall of an alpha type of story.
5/14/24, 12:41 AM
I need more chapters urgently
5/13/24, 7:51 AM
So glad to read another barber story that focused on mpb. I naturally wanted more and I know his is where you want to end it but it would be nice to see our Ian return to David for a little more balding as he has gotten to love the smoothness of his scalp. I also would have liked more description of what happened with his facial hair. Did David leave a mustache or shave him clean. Maybe he is encouraged to wear a mustache when he revisits David where he shows up with his new toupee, that barely covers his dip at the back. Just a thought. Thank you anyway. Got me horny as.

5/13/24, 11:32 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) I'll write another story involving MPB soon. It seems like a lot more than I expected like it. What about it do you enjoy?
5/13/24, 7:40 AM
I like how you write these barbershop tales. So excited to read more by you. I particularily like how you write about the characters developing need to be bald without going into the why. We are left to our own imagination which is pretty cool. I’d like to try this too as my stories take too long with explanations causing the multi-parts. Also love the chosen hairstyle of a Pompadour before the shave. Bravo.

5/13/24, 11:29 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) Thanks. This narrator can't really explain anything by the end, but he can't escape it either. I also thought it would be interesting if his style of preference were something very different like a pompadour, making the change a major one.
mustache
4/25/24, 2:51 AM
I’d really love more stories from you! Are you a male pattern bald man yourself?

4/25/24, 10:20 PM
@mustache Thanks, and no, not personally.

5/13/24, 7:53 AM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) Do you wear your hair in a high pomp?

5/13/24, 11:23 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) I'm afraid not. That's a style you like?
5/13/24, 11:00 PM
Incredible. Insanely hot. Thank you!
5/11/24, 7:28 AM
Great start !

5/13/24, 10:13 PM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) :slightly_smiling_face:
5/11/24, 5:17 AM
Intrigued.

5/13/24, 10:12 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) :slightly_smiling_face:
Zander
5/12/24, 2:46 PM
We are waiting for the continuation)

5/13/24, 10:12 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) It is in the making, hope to post it very soon.
5/11/24, 7:24 PM
Great setup and interesting start. Though I just noticed that there are a number of instances in the story where you switched between identifying "Dave" in the 3rd person and "you" in the 2nd person (as in referring to the reader as Dave). Although I figured it out pretty quickly, but the flip-flopping of Dave's reference was definitely a bit confusing at times. Just keep an eye out on that in the subsequent parts.

5/13/24, 10:11 PM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) Thank you! I will keep this in mind! And I will try to correct this and keep an eye out in the sequel