Recent Comments

5/13/24, 7:40 AM
I like how you write these barbershop tales. So excited to read more by you. I particularily like how you write about the characters developing need to be bald without going into the why. We are left to our own imagination which is pretty cool. I’d like to try this too as my stories take too long with explanations causing the multi-parts. Also love the chosen hairstyle of a Pompadour before the shave. Bravo.

5/13/24, 11:29 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) Thanks. This narrator can't really explain anything by the end, but he can't escape it either. I also thought it would be interesting if his style of preference were something very different like a pompadour, making the change a major one.
mustache
4/25/24, 2:51 AM
I’d really love more stories from you! Are you a male pattern bald man yourself?

4/25/24, 10:20 PM
@mustache Thanks, and no, not personally.

5/13/24, 7:53 AM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) Do you wear your hair in a high pomp?

5/13/24, 11:23 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) I'm afraid not. That's a style you like?
5/13/24, 11:00 PM
Incredible. Insanely hot. Thank you!
5/11/24, 7:28 AM
Great start !

5/13/24, 10:13 PM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) :slightly_smiling_face:
5/11/24, 5:17 AM
Intrigued.

5/13/24, 10:12 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) :slightly_smiling_face:
Zander
5/12/24, 2:46 PM
We are waiting for the continuation)

5/13/24, 10:12 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) It is in the making, hope to post it very soon.
5/11/24, 7:24 PM
Great setup and interesting start. Though I just noticed that there are a number of instances in the story where you switched between identifying "Dave" in the 3rd person and "you" in the 2nd person (as in referring to the reader as Dave). Although I figured it out pretty quickly, but the flip-flopping of Dave's reference was definitely a bit confusing at times. Just keep an eye out on that in the subsequent parts.

5/13/24, 10:11 PM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) Thank you! I will keep this in mind! And I will try to correct this and keep an eye out in the sequel
5/13/24, 10:05 PM
I'd love to see more, what you did was good but there is so much more to explore.
5/11/24, 4:36 AM
Great start! I'm loving how you're showing the growth of the herd and their changing behavior and clothing. I'm just a little confused about the layout of this town. It's got a coffee shop, bar, and gym all in close walking distance, which would suggest an urban setting. But there's also somehow also a big red barn in walking distance too?

5/13/24, 10:02 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thank you. Love your work! Your feedback is appreciated. I was planning to revisit my story in a couple of days. I have been reading it and noticed some flaws myself as well and I will keep this in mind!
Zander
5/13/24, 9:59 PM
It's good that the book disappears immediately after one use. Thanks to this, no one can have absolute power over everyone, but only over a limited group of people.