Recent Comments

4/23/24, 7:50 AM
Seriously this story is fantastic. Idk if we’re going to keep following Ian but that would be SO satisfying given the ending. Overall though, AMAZING and looking forward to more of anything.

4/24/24, 8:04 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Thank you! I've fleshed out this concept as much as I can, but there'll be more concepts to come. What did you like best with this one?

4/24/24, 8:13 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) I like the creeping feeling of embarrassment/humiliation and how it’s all wrapped in an overall pleasant exterior. Nothing is really malicious and it’s oh so satisfying to watch the main character get in way over their head, lol. The way Ian feels as if everyone is staring at him is fantastic. Also love how the change isn’t permanent but it lasts a pretty significant amount of time- and is essentially indistinguishable from actual male pattern baldness throughout that time frame.

Hank
4/25/24, 5:03 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) This story still has a lot of meat left in it. It could definitely use a sequel where Ian goes to the wedding, and he is forced to choose between keeping his mpb secret under the toupee, or taking it off and begging known as male pattern bald to his entire family

4/25/24, 10:16 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Ah yeah, Ian could have stopped at any point, but he didn't for reasons even he doesn't understand. Once it's done it's done, though, and now he'll have to live with it for a good while, and hope his secret isn't revealed.

4/25/24, 10:20 PM
@Hank Which do you prefer?

Hank
4/27/24, 9:52 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) I think it's hotter to see him go to the party with a toupee that looks too conservative for his style, have his brother give him grief and mess with his hair, and while his brother is messing with him, the toupee comes off of his head.

5/8/24, 10:44 PM
@Hank Ah so you like it best if he can't ultimately hide it, and it's revealed to everyone?
Bootedpig
5/8/24, 10:38 PM
Fuck yeah !!!
5/8/24, 2:43 PM
I was hoping to read that at the end of his shift, the cock cage had fallen onto the floor leading to a big cheer from the patrons!

5/8/24, 10:34 PM
@[Sub4Taylor](/user/show/2656113) Sshhh. It's a surprise tool that'll help us later!
5/8/24, 10:25 PM
Wow this crazy hot, great work! As much as i hate Brian and want to see Tyler win, seeing Tyler slowly lose and become a cumdump for his friends would actually be so much hotter.
5/8/24, 4:05 PM
This was great! Strong characterization and good pacing of the narrative. Hopefully you'll share some more stories with us soon!

5/8/24, 5:47 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Cheers lad, it was a blast to write.
4/29/24, 12:02 PM
I am definitely falling with ALEX while reading these words. This is FANTASTIC! I am off to the gym and I am definitely going to get an erection thinking about the doctor!

5/8/24, 1:10 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) A good Himbo has erections in the gym while training and is proud of it, heheheheh
4/29/24, 11:48 AM
WOW oh WOW! this is just magnificent. Alex... the red hair, the italian descent... OH MY. Dr. Jonathan... he is my hero

5/8/24, 1:07 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I got inspiration from one of my subs, he has red hair, blue eyes, Italian descent, he's just not muscular (yet, hehehehe)
5/7/24, 9:50 PM
Holy moly this is an all time series.

5/8/24, 1:01 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) I hope I can keep your interest until the end, as my mind is buzzing with ideas. Soon a new slave will be captured, and I already left the tip in the air, hahahaha.
5/8/24, 12:20 PM
when you mentioned the bodily smells that come from the workout... and it fueling more intensity... that was AMAZING! well done

5/8/24, 1:00 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you, I'm glad you like my work. This makes me even more motivated.
5/8/24, 7:07 AM
Yessss, my favourite series returns! So incredibly hot, and I love all the little details highlighting the sleaziness and smug power-tripping of our protagonist, all the ass-grabs and unfair rule changes. Super well-written, glad you gave us another chapter!