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5/2/24, 1:04 PM
Hot!
5/2/24, 11:25 AM
When we can enjoy the new stories for this part…it been more than half years….everyday im waiting this series to be continue
5/2/24, 11:17 AM
OMG loved this story! Any chance you will continue this? We all want to know what happens next!!
5/2/24, 1:03 AM
Hot, but also, it’s giving… orientalism. It’s giving tired white supremacist tropes.

5/2/24, 4:51 AM
@[Edgarbird](/user/show/908403) Change the protagonist to be a pale Jewish boy, now its giving world war 3 vibes (if you prefer).

Anonymous
5/2/24, 7:15 AM
@[Edgarbird](/user/show/908403) cringe

5/2/24, 7:30 AM
I had a long boring conversation with reddit about the contents of the story. You can replace white boy with Jewish, you can replace Arab with white jock and the story would be exactly identical which means that its at least not _inherently_ racist. The protagonist would have the same reaction to any incompatible/masculine figure. This is also not meant to be a serious story, its humorous and told through the PoV of a weird (perhaps slightly autistic, maybe a bit misanthropic) main character. I don't know how you got "white supremacist" from any of it. Also the character is not racist, he hates everyone equally. He just sees "different" and is using racial language to express his initial frustration. It **is** offensive, though. Thankfully, its just a story.
Anonymous
5/2/24, 2:56 AM
So, now we need to learn how Ethan ended up "suggestible" or how Carlos plays into this? You did a great job of starting the story. Now let your imagination go off on wild tangents. You'll be surprised where it leads.
5/1/24, 2:57 PM
A completely unlikely premise done very well. I would love to have had a more positive "We love how we ended up" ending but a good story non the less. My neighbours were into gaining. I remember Dale being built like me. We played Rugby together for years and initially I thought he was just bulking but soon he was jiggling. He was always in an increasingly good mood. One day he confided in me and asked if I wanted to watch his feeding; Funnel and hose twice a day by his profoundly hairy muscular partner. It was so hot to watch his pleasure. I'd love to see you impart that contentment in another chapter here.

5/2/24, 2:17 AM
@[Stroppy Author](/user/show/227812) Thanks for the comment, I do like the idea of ending with a positive reflection of the characters. As a gainer myself, I enjoy both the aspects of a person's body growing, and also the excitement it has for other as they watch or partake in encouraging. I will definitely keep this mind on future projects!
Anonymous
5/2/24, 12:23 AM
I hope it’s not Game Over for this story. It’s one of my favorite ones. Also, sorry for the bad pun, I couldn’t resist.
5/1/24, 11:50 PM
Classic Baralai.
5/1/24, 11:24 PM
Outstanding job, Charlie! I have to concur with some of the other commenters on here - a strong contender for one of your best stories yet! The fourth wall breaks were fun, just teetering on the edge but knowing when to pull back before becoming _too_ silly. Matt is adorable, and I could just imagine him doing those intense squats and workouts all while envisioning your big booty stories in his mind. Very well done, Charlie! You did a great job on this one!