Recent Comments

5/1/24, 6:39 AM
Another chapter update. Huzzah. I really appreciate the work you are both putting into this series. It's so good, I really love that the earlier chapters are sharper and in line with your full vision and -- hopefully -- even more fun for new readers to enjoy in order to appreciate this world you've set up. I love the pet nature and Jasper seeing one up close. The hypersexual nature of Coins and the ease with which they get sexual at their breakfast. Jasper discovering some kinks of his own, it seems. I love it. <3
Unhappy_Endings
5/1/24, 4:12 AM
Honestly, one of the best things I’ve read on this site! The perfect story to goon to while locked in chastity, too.
Lavender Lad
4/30/24, 4:10 PM
Arab guy but he speaks in farsi?

4/30/24, 6:56 PM
correct ... He would be Iranian, nor Arab, if he speaks Farsi. Iranians make a HUGE deal out of this distinction given the centuries of religious oppression. That said, though, I really dig the story and hope the slow burn continues. And who's to say a member of the family married an Iranian, and Abdul is trilingual?

5/1/24, 3:54 AM
@[daemon](/user/show/10011087) Lol! I messed up because I just googled "arab languages" and took what sounded the coolest. Thank you for the in-lore explanation, though :D
5/1/24, 3:30 AM
This can go so many ways. Thank you
5/1/24, 2:58 AM
Great story, and the photos really help with the visualization. I'm def bookmarking this!
Ben
4/30/24, 5:24 AM
I find myself going through your stories alot these days to find something different to get off to and you never disappoint, you definitely have a gift! 🔥

4/30/24, 11:54 PM
@[Ben](/user/show/10010133) you have no idea how much that means to me.
Anonymous
4/30/24, 4:47 PM
So hot fingers crossed for a part 2 or even part 2 and part 3 hehe

4/30/24, 8:05 PM
@Anonymous Thanks buddy. More is coming.
Anonymous
4/27/24, 10:14 AM
SUPER HOT BRO!!! I luv your stories where a hot arrogant top daddy gets taken down. can't wait for more :)

4/30/24, 8:05 PM
@Anonymous Thanks man. More is on the way, but might be a bit.
4/30/24, 6:03 PM
Can't wait to see the himbo he becomes.
4/30/24, 4:06 PM
This story is out of this world good. My college roommate followed this course with me years ago. It's like reliving that. Your writing takes the reader into the subjects mind. It's amazing and thank you for being amazing.