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4/26/24, 10:08 AM
Man this is so hot
Maximus
4/26/24, 6:18 AM
Not bad
4/26/24, 4:50 AM
Hoping for at least one more chapter of 'Dad Pussy Syndrome,' bro. Pretty please?
11/29/23, 7:58 PM
Loved this. I usually feel bad for the victims/main characters of these types of stories but holy shit this guy was an asshole. Glad you really played into that before the hypnosis/mind control kicked in

11/30/23, 11:45 AM
@[Kael](/user/show/10042411) Thank you! And really wanted this guy to be a dick from the start. Don't get me wrong I do love the Twilight Zone, Goosebumps, ect. twist where they're isn't a hair ending and they might not deserve their fate but I wanted one where the guy did.

12/5/23, 12:11 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Will there be another chapter? (I hope!)

Anonymous
12/12/23, 3:06 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) isn't it Officer Freewill ? (not Goodwill) or did that change with his progressing transformation?

Anonymous
12/21/23, 3:15 PM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Could you do the next chapter as a Christmas edition

Anonymous
12/21/23, 6:54 PM
@Anonymous Will there be a return of the zipper in Jeeves’ uniform?

4/26/24, 3:31 AM
@Anonymous Great idea! Santa costume
Feb 17, 2024
Anonymous
4/26/24, 3:18 AM
Very well written and hot story! I hope there’s another chapter coming soon.
1/28/24, 9:38 PM
You incorporated a lot of ideas into a short space and did it well. The transformation was vividly described. I especially liked when John was allowed to speak in his own voice, and then continue describing his new life in Johnathan's words. Those moments were intense.

4/26/24, 1:38 AM
@Throne Very well put.
4/26/24, 1:37 AM
Totally loved the story as well as read. Like wow, nicely done plot, as well. Makes me wish
4/24/24, 11:07 PM
Looking forward to this! You should link the separate chapters into the same story! 🙂

Rubberspiraldronthiago
4/26/24, 1:25 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I tried that but I got the second chapter apart from the fact that I'm new to writing, I've always been a reader, I'm learning. I invite you to read the second part. Thank you for your contribution champion
4/25/24, 12:50 AM
Hot!

Rubberspiraldronthiago
4/26/24, 1:19 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) thanks champion
4/25/24, 11:27 PM
Perfect scores all around. Brilliant work and THANK YOU! Wow!