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4/25/24, 12:50 AM
Hot!

Rubberspiraldronthiago
4/26/24, 1:19 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) thanks champion
4/25/24, 11:27 PM
Perfect scores all around. Brilliant work and THANK YOU! Wow!
4/25/24, 9:50 PM
Love this story and so happy to see it continued!
Apr 24, 2024
4/24/24, 12:10 PM
I thought the scenes describing the growth of the drone collective were extremely hot, and I loved how we saw Antonio undergoing a very slow conversion, as it took time for more nanobots to replicate in his body. On the other hand, Pete's response to all of this was so passive and chill, it frequently made me laugh. The story would have made more sense to me--and been even hotter--if we got some indications that Pete had also been mentally affected by the cyborg implant, but was just oblivious about it.

Anonymous
4/24/24, 1:15 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) thanks for the feedback and I can see what you mean... this was my 3rd rewrite so the story has evolved a lot from the initial version and I can see it could use more... details. Let me see what I can edit in to add more to incorporate some additional ideas!

4/25/24, 8:44 PM
@Anonymous I thought about that too but I just assumed that the issue was that Peter was not genre savvy. (Either that or he's dumb.) I mean when the third guy showed up if it were me I would have at least kind of leaned forward and went, dude if you don't leave right now you're going to get turned into a drone though if you're into that... Which has you explicitly stated (good job there) he was. It did add a very slightly comical vibe to it but I don't think that's a problem. It's basically a drone threesome romance.
4/25/24, 8:36 PM
A great start! I look forward to more fun!
4/25/24, 8:25 PM
Interesting start. The move to the Doc pov is fun. Looking forward to the result of Harry being a subby needy bottom.
4/25/24, 8:16 PM
Sexy story! Love the frat takeover.
4/25/24, 7:46 PM
Feels a bit rushed, but very hot!!!!
4/25/24, 7:46 PM
I love such stories. I don't know why but they turn me on. Keep on writing! The wishes are great.
4/25/24, 7:42 PM
Re-read everything to be sure I did not forget anything, man the whole story is so hot!!! So many new men to turn into depraved slaves, so many possibilities, but Christmas is not over yet!