Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/23/24, 2:05 AM
Keep going. Can't wait for the next installment!

4/23/24, 9:52 PM
@Anonymous Might make one idk yet. Thanks for reading tho

Anonymous
4/24/24, 2:17 AM
@[erotichypnostories](/user/show/10007285) Dude! You gotta keep this going. It's too good just for one chapter. Let your imagination go to crazy ass places. It'll be fun, therapeutic, dare I say.

4/24/24, 2:20 AM
@Anonymous Maybe! Don't really have the desire to continue it rn but who knows lol
Anonymous
4/24/24, 2:16 AM
Great start! Can't wait to see where this goes.
4/23/24, 9:06 PM
Charlie, congrats on your best story ever. This is truly amazing stuff!

4/23/24, 10:18 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Best story ever??? WOW, thank you! :D
hairyartist
4/23/24, 1:29 PM
Awesome first chapter thank you~

4/23/24, 9:52 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) Thanks for reading! We'll see if I get around to another chapter lol
Anonymous
4/22/24, 10:07 PM
This is so fucking hot I'd love to see a part 2!!

4/23/24, 9:51 PM
@Anonymous Maybe! Thanks for reading
Anonymous
4/23/24, 8:30 PM
Very hot story. I think it would’ve been cool to see Banjos downfall. He doesn’t seem to get affected much, which is a shame. Glad you’re still writing though. I think I’ve read and enjoyed just about every single story you’ve uploaded on here. Thank you
4/23/24, 8:30 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I'm a sucker for bad endings though, and I do wish this ending was worse for Brad. I thought this was perfect up to right after the mindlessly sucking part (Kal redirecting Brad by making him suck his cock like this was a genius idea that I quite liked). I like to see protagonists become total bottom sluts with no autonomy, so I'm not doing backflips over how Kal uses Brad's dick sometimes and that there is some genuine level of care between the two, even if it is a bit off and on. I like leaving more tension in resolution. For instance, Brad seems fully satisfied by satisfying his master, and by doing so all his needs are me. I like to see an actual sacrifice being made, like Brad's needs genuinely being neglected, but Brad ultimately deciding that his contentedness is not and should not be a priority. But these are all me problems. Oh boy do I need therapy lol. I think your writing is great and you wrapped it up just how you saw fit.
Anonymous
4/23/24, 5:12 PM
This is my new favorite series. Unlike some of the other commenters, I’m hoping to see Duncan get out of his cum-lock punishment and back to belonging with the rest of the team but in any case, I can’t wait to see what happens next. Hope to read a new chapter soon!
4/23/24, 4:31 PM
MMMMmm, hot. Love a pup play tf.
4/23/24, 7:46 AM
Please continue and tell us what happens when John walks into Boots.

4/23/24, 11:52 AM
@[Yorksbiker08](/user/show/1049586) Hehe, I will!