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4/22/24, 3:25 AM
I wasnt sure if it was the Priest storh, since i cant remember his name. But i guess its not him. So now im confuse, is Aziel alive or not? Oh and Daniels story and Adams story somewhat parallels each other, huh.

4/23/24, 11:00 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) This IS "Father" Daniel's backstory. A little dive into his past. Whose experiences will be meaningful for the events to come.
Zander
4/23/24, 8:42 AM
When will this wonderful story continue?
Zander
4/23/24, 8:32 AM
Will there be a new chapter coming out soon? Or where else can I read your stories?
4/23/24, 7:58 AM
Hot! Hope we get to see what happens with Kieran and Eric... and soon!
Maximus
4/23/24, 6:42 AM
It's not bad.
4/23/24, 6:19 AM
So glad you’re back!
4/23/24, 2:38 AM
Congrats on finishing the series! Apologies if my comment on your previous chapter sounded harsh. Either way though I'm very satisfied with this ending and it left me with quite the hard on. like i said before 10/10. Eddie is one of the best written protagonists i've had the pleasure of reading in a while. I like how this ending puts everything in a full circle and kind of completes a character journey satisfyingly.

4/23/24, 3:14 AM
@[BlackJaxus](/user/show/10012672) No apologies necessary! I didn't take anything as an insult to my writing or storytelling, merely speaks to what you wish would happen! That's pretty standard fair. I'm just glad so many people find enjoyment out of my crazy-ass stories. Very happy to hear you feel like it's full circle for Eddie. Honestly, when it comes to Yufus, that's best he could have hoped for...I figure Yusuf didn't necessarily want to torment Eddie for the rest of his life; merely put someone he deemed 'ideal' in the eyes of normal society into a reality in which that 'ideal' is actually the 'weird, pervert'. Eddie just happened to be the guy Yusuf chose to do it too. Proximity, maybe...but also cuz he had hot sons that Yusuf wanted for himself :P

4/23/24, 3:49 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) And i get that! Yusuf is an understandable antagonist for this story and I'd do most of the things he'd do in his shoes... Though unlike Yusuf, I'm a bit more greedy and would own Eddie Berger myself, maybe make him have all his memories alongside his new fabricated ones and make him both delighted and disgusted to serve me. but that's my personal opinion i guess. In terms of the last chapter, i thought the last paragraphs was hinting mind erasure as Eddie's fate, or something similar, instead of the outcome shown in this epilogue, and Mind erasure is something i don't like for a story written like this. So it's me and my expectations being wrong so. I find Fred's fate very entertaining, I love buff, "alpha male" men that's worth nothing and are treated like absolute garbage. I also like that you took inspiration from Wesley Bracken's story too, i read it, and i had fun with it, but its so weird i barely made the connection that this story was directly inspired by it.

4/23/24, 3:56 AM
@[BlackJaxus](/user/show/10012672) I'm glad that it stands on it's own merits and isn't derivative of his amazing work. The last thing I wanna do is rip someone off...I'd even sent him an e-mail requesting permission to write a story inspired by his but never heard back, unfortunately. Knowing that it's not just his chapter on steroids is a relief, but definitely still wanna give him credit where it's due. This story started as the idea of the epilogue, then realized the inspiration I'd had from Wesley Bracken could work well with that...throw in the gloves as a 'Mad Scientist' invention, it just seemed like it was the right time to get this idea down on paper!

4/23/24, 4:46 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Well good job! It really does stand on it's own merits and i enjoy the story very much.
4/23/24, 4:15 AM
I really loved the "trick the chip by offering a false dichotomy idea" especially!
DWK
4/23/24, 12:35 AM
Nothing here for me. Big disappointment.

4/23/24, 3:46 AM
@[DWK](/user/show/950736) Still got ya to comment so I’ll take that as a win 🥰
4/23/24, 3:35 AM
Edlam, another great story! I really love the corruption and manipulations in your stories. I love how you have both a mixture of deprave perversion, but at the same time, everyone gets what they wants/needs/deserves. There is also a level of hopefulness at the end that I enjoy. Even after everything, Yusuf still seems to have a soft spot of Eddie, even leaving an opportunity to corrupt him and make him part of the family by implying he keeps on erasing his memories waiting for him to change his own morals and give in. I look forward to reading more stories from you soon.