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4/23/24, 4:15 AM
I really loved the "trick the chip by offering a false dichotomy idea" especially!
DWK
4/23/24, 12:35 AM
Nothing here for me. Big disappointment.

4/23/24, 3:46 AM
@[DWK](/user/show/950736) Still got ya to comment so I’ll take that as a win 🥰
4/23/24, 3:35 AM
Edlam, another great story! I really love the corruption and manipulations in your stories. I love how you have both a mixture of deprave perversion, but at the same time, everyone gets what they wants/needs/deserves. There is also a level of hopefulness at the end that I enjoy. Even after everything, Yusuf still seems to have a soft spot of Eddie, even leaving an opportunity to corrupt him and make him part of the family by implying he keeps on erasing his memories waiting for him to change his own morals and give in. I look forward to reading more stories from you soon.
Anonymous
4/23/24, 3:27 AM
WOW! As a fellow fan of Asian men (and Asian bodybuilders), this was an AMAZING piece of work. This tale will definitely be on my “frequently read” for a long time!
Anonymous
4/23/24, 2:09 AM
Oh man this was such a great mix of slightly tongue-in-cheek humor, tender romance, and hot smut. it was very much a departure from your previous works but just as riveting!
Maximus
4/21/24, 10:20 PM
Interesting.

4/22/24, 11:42 PM
@[Maximus](/user/show/789098) Thank you 🙂
Zander
4/22/24, 11:21 PM
Thanks again for sharing your story, your work is some of the best on this site. But, unfortunately, the last chapter for me personally lacked the WOW effect (cliffhanger) in the plot. Perhaps my expectations in this regard were too exaggerated, so I was looking forward to the epilogue. And it’s not for nothing that they say that readers’ expectations are his own problems).
Zander
4/22/24, 11:16 PM
Thanks for the story. One of the darkest, erotic and sad stories on the site. The ending is left open, which I like (since each reader can end the story the way they want) and + it gives a window for continuation. I really liked the character of Eddie, a tragic character and very well written, unlike Yusuf (whom you don’t sympathize with at all) and you want to die, like Joffrey in “Game of Thrones”. I liked the fact that you kept Eddie as a person with a good heart who wouldn't do things like Yusuf did, and that says a lot about the character as an individual that I have a lot of respect for. Personally for me this epilogue seemed to be the end of season 1) or arc. I hope someone or you will someday be inspired to continue this story. As a result, for now I can give this part of the story a 6.8 I slightly increased the rating because the character of Eddie was better shown, developed and evoked sympathy in an erotic story (which is rare) The epilogue lacked a Cliffhanger and if the city had been captured and changed, it is obvious that the authorities of the State and the country would have known this, because the population of the town cannot help but behave strangely and not arouse suspicion in the rest of the world, not to mention relatives (which entails a lot of questions) Although I know that in an erotic porn story you shouldn’t focus too much on this because the logic in such stories is, to put it mildly, lame 🤣. I'm also looking forward to the continuation of your last story)
4/22/24, 11:06 PM
The one thing that kind of annoys me in an otherwise fun superhero sex romp is the assumption that bottoms have small dicks and tops have big ones. I don't know if that's a kink (if so, fine; not mine, but ydy) or a very weird take on gay sex. I personally love a big, hard dick flopping around when a bottom is being pounded, to show and make clear how much they're loving it.
4/22/24, 10:39 PM
Congrats on completing a series, Edlam! While it sucks that the story has ended, but as a reader, it's always nice to get a full wrap up from the author so we get the full picture of your original storyline idea. Now you just have about 5 others that you'll hopefully get back on them someday. ;) I have to admit that the physical sex/race transformations are not my thing because I feel it takes away from who that person is as your original subject of obsession. But I accept and appreciate that this is definitely a theme that is enjoyed by many others, so no complaints from me on that storyline, I simply look past that and focus on the other interesting bits. In line with Edlam's usual theme of chaotic incestual debauchery brought on by some unwanted powerful intruder, I quite enjoy how you've wrapped up this series...just where we'd like them all to be, all over one another constantly without a care in the world. I also quite like the idea that you instilled in this epilogue, where the actual normal guy is left all alone being seen as a pervert in this warped "new normal" established by the antagonist. A bit post-apocalyptic type of dimension in some ways. Right/wrong become all a matter of perspective. That's a very interesting takeaway from this. With Yusuf's influence now so extensive across the whole town (is this the largest scale of corruption you've achieved so far?), the reality has simply been fully rewritten and there's no possibility to see any other way anymore. Yet for all of us (and people beyond that town) looking in, all of them are also just equally crazy and lost in another world.