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4/22/24, 10:39 PM
Congrats on completing a series, Edlam! While it sucks that the story has ended, but as a reader, it's always nice to get a full wrap up from the author so we get the full picture of your original storyline idea. Now you just have about 5 others that you'll hopefully get back on them someday. ;) I have to admit that the physical sex/race transformations are not my thing because I feel it takes away from who that person is as your original subject of obsession. But I accept and appreciate that this is definitely a theme that is enjoyed by many others, so no complaints from me on that storyline, I simply look past that and focus on the other interesting bits. In line with Edlam's usual theme of chaotic incestual debauchery brought on by some unwanted powerful intruder, I quite enjoy how you've wrapped up this series...just where we'd like them all to be, all over one another constantly without a care in the world. I also quite like the idea that you instilled in this epilogue, where the actual normal guy is left all alone being seen as a pervert in this warped "new normal" established by the antagonist. A bit post-apocalyptic type of dimension in some ways. Right/wrong become all a matter of perspective. That's a very interesting takeaway from this. With Yusuf's influence now so extensive across the whole town (is this the largest scale of corruption you've achieved so far?), the reality has simply been fully rewritten and there's no possibility to see any other way anymore. Yet for all of us (and people beyond that town) looking in, all of them are also just equally crazy and lost in another world.
4/22/24, 9:09 PM
I wasn't sure that you really needed to expand on the first story. It seemed pretty straightforward, the clones simply drug and reprogram their owners to take over for them for some reason. Fun concept and interesting twist, but could easily have been a one and done. However with this story, the clone has some kind of pheromone power, the mental subjugation sequence is really interesting and hot. You successfully sold the concept of someone enjoying being driven into an animalistic state of submission. Now I'm also questioning if the other clone was actually drugging food or if the clones exude some kind of drug from their biology that affects their template human. That'll be interesting to find out.
4/22/24, 4:47 PM
Thank you for your wonderful story. Race transformation and (fake) incest are some of my favorite erotic themes. I have a fantasy in which I, an East Asian man in my 40s, is forced to become a "genetic son" by a dominant elderly man of another race -- a white redneck old man, a masculine Arab old man, or an old Indian farmer -- become his son and incest lover-slave at the same time. Sometimes I imagine being their young, stupid son by age regression, sometimes I imagine being their old, grieving slave by age progression. I also think that one day I want to write a story or commission it on this subject. So reading this novel from you has been a very happy and frightening experience for me at the same time. As I have empathized with Eddie over the past few weeks, I have felt terrible at the end of the story and am thrilled at the same time! It's like the weird kind of catharsis you feel when you watch a horror movie with a bad ending. It was an experience where it felt like my own desires were being "castrated". And yet, strangely, my desires seemed to be being fulfilled little by little... If I had written a novel based on your material, Eddie would have become a complete fool and a blissful low-ranking member of the Wasfis. Or he would have lived a miserable existence forever, screaming in his mind while retaining his memory and ego, but being sex slaves to the Wasfis, obsessed with libido and obedience. Either way, it couldn't have been compared to Eddie's miserable yet happy fate of yours, which is very original and fascinating. Once again, thank you for your original and charmingly twisted story. It was a wonderful and exciting experience!
Anonymous
4/22/24, 3:46 PM
So meta
4/22/24, 2:32 PM
i cannot begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. THANK YOU so much for writing it. It was sexy, sensual, sensitive, and so very well-written. THANK YOU.
4/22/24, 2:25 PM
top notch, great story!
Anonymous
4/22/24, 11:58 AM
That was so HOT and wholesome too. Hope to read more!!
4/22/24, 11:23 AM
Excellent story! Super-hot!!!!
Zander
9/23/23, 1:29 AM
For me, this story is one of the best on the site. Although it is also not without its drawbacks. 1. The downside is that Blaine quickly discovers the cameras and through the camera he somehow manages to hypnotize Levi very quickly and this does not look very believable, to put it mildly, considering that Levi could simply turn off or rewind the moment of hypnosis above himself. 2. The downside is that there are few sex scenes with Austin and Blaine (behind Levi's back) there was not enough voyeurism for me in this story. I mean (watching Levi watch through a video camera as Blaine gradually corrupted Austin over the course of several weeks him into his absolute slave for sex) I give the story an 8/10 just from these missed and unsaid moments.

4/22/24, 10:53 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I occasionally drift through my favourites list to read something and often enough end up coming back to and enjoying this series. After finishing it again, I thought I’d mirror Zander’s comment, as it sums up for myself as well the minor qualms I had with the story. Yeah, I didn’t really find how Levi was brought into the fold to be very believable, but I’m not going to yammer on about that as I think I said something about that on chapter two’s comments. I will admit I wanted to see Austin get fucked, pounded the hell out of actually, 😆 just to cuckold Levi more. More sex in general really… 😋 but I understand that’s not really your schtick. Perhaps implicitly Blaine had his way with Austin at some point behind the scenes… Anyway I’m glad this story is back (I remember it being gone for a time) because the first chapter induction sequence is where this story really shines and is still a gold standard, phenomenal. Practically can get off to that part hands free lmao. 😝 If I could break that Mind Control slider, I would! It deserves 100/5 of those chained brains 🧠 🧠🧠🧠🧠🧠🧠 I’ll read it again at some point. 😝 There’s something about it that keeps me coming back…
4/22/24, 10:29 AM
Great story. I love this!