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4/22/24, 4:47 PM
Thank you for your wonderful story. Race transformation and (fake) incest are some of my favorite erotic themes. I have a fantasy in which I, an East Asian man in my 40s, is forced to become a "genetic son" by a dominant elderly man of another race -- a white redneck old man, a masculine Arab old man, or an old Indian farmer -- become his son and incest lover-slave at the same time. Sometimes I imagine being their young, stupid son by age regression, sometimes I imagine being their old, grieving slave by age progression. I also think that one day I want to write a story or commission it on this subject. So reading this novel from you has been a very happy and frightening experience for me at the same time. As I have empathized with Eddie over the past few weeks, I have felt terrible at the end of the story and am thrilled at the same time! It's like the weird kind of catharsis you feel when you watch a horror movie with a bad ending. It was an experience where it felt like my own desires were being "castrated". And yet, strangely, my desires seemed to be being fulfilled little by little... If I had written a novel based on your material, Eddie would have become a complete fool and a blissful low-ranking member of the Wasfis. Or he would have lived a miserable existence forever, screaming in his mind while retaining his memory and ego, but being sex slaves to the Wasfis, obsessed with libido and obedience. Either way, it couldn't have been compared to Eddie's miserable yet happy fate of yours, which is very original and fascinating. Once again, thank you for your original and charmingly twisted story. It was a wonderful and exciting experience!
Anonymous
4/22/24, 3:46 PM
So meta
4/22/24, 2:32 PM
i cannot begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. THANK YOU so much for writing it. It was sexy, sensual, sensitive, and so very well-written. THANK YOU.
4/22/24, 2:25 PM
top notch, great story!
Anonymous
4/22/24, 11:58 AM
That was so HOT and wholesome too. Hope to read more!!
4/22/24, 11:23 AM
Excellent story! Super-hot!!!!
Zander
9/23/23, 1:29 AM
For me, this story is one of the best on the site. Although it is also not without its drawbacks. 1. The downside is that Blaine quickly discovers the cameras and through the camera he somehow manages to hypnotize Levi very quickly and this does not look very believable, to put it mildly, considering that Levi could simply turn off or rewind the moment of hypnosis above himself. 2. The downside is that there are few sex scenes with Austin and Blaine (behind Levi's back) there was not enough voyeurism for me in this story. I mean (watching Levi watch through a video camera as Blaine gradually corrupted Austin over the course of several weeks him into his absolute slave for sex) I give the story an 8/10 just from these missed and unsaid moments.

4/22/24, 10:53 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I occasionally drift through my favourites list to read something and often enough end up coming back to and enjoying this series. After finishing it again, I thought I’d mirror Zander’s comment, as it sums up for myself as well the minor qualms I had with the story. Yeah, I didn’t really find how Levi was brought into the fold to be very believable, but I’m not going to yammer on about that as I think I said something about that on chapter two’s comments. I will admit I wanted to see Austin get fucked, pounded the hell out of actually, 😆 just to cuckold Levi more. More sex in general really… 😋 but I understand that’s not really your schtick. Perhaps implicitly Blaine had his way with Austin at some point behind the scenes… Anyway I’m glad this story is back (I remember it being gone for a time) because the first chapter induction sequence is where this story really shines and is still a gold standard, phenomenal. Practically can get off to that part hands free lmao. 😝 If I could break that Mind Control slider, I would! It deserves 100/5 of those chained brains 🧠 🧠🧠🧠🧠🧠🧠 I’ll read it again at some point. 😝 There’s something about it that keeps me coming back…
4/22/24, 10:29 AM
Great story. I love this!
Anonymous
4/22/24, 9:46 AM
Waiting for the next episode! Amazing!
Anonymous
4/22/24, 7:56 AM
Please continue this