Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/21/24, 8:15 PM
I wish there was more to this. Great story!
Apr 20, 2024
4/21/24, 1:28 PM
This was hot. And so very relatable for me!

4/21/24, 7:36 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Apr 20, 2024
4/20/24, 6:09 PM
I like the plozt very much. Will there be a second part?

4/21/24, 7:36 PM
@[Pup Vince](/user/show/10023016) Hey there! I didn't write a second part, but it may happen.
4/21/24, 6:09 PM
😈😈😈😈
4/21/24, 3:54 AM
Well yeah,it finally happened again. Doesn't happen often that a story is too fucked up for me lol,so in a way I gotta show respect for that 🙏 I can do with depraved just fine,but cruel usually kills my mood. Still,this is expertely written and set up and OF COURSE I will be there for the epilogue. Because I am fascinated by all this. Great story 🙏

4/21/24, 5:19 PM
@[ForgottenCradle](/user/show/911705) I take this as the highest compliment! hahahaha, hopefully, the epilogue puts a nice bow on it for you <3
4/21/24, 3:59 PM
What a unique story!
Mar 24, 2024
4/21/24, 3:29 PM
Hot. But snug briefs would hardly be humiliating to the average rugby player. Generally they do need to wear some sort of tight fitting underwear so they might be used to briefs anyways, and the amount of tugging on their shorts in the course of a match can expose a lot of their butts. And do you realize how much homoerotic stuff the average straight rugby player does?
4/20/24, 7:40 PM
Fucking YES!! 🤩🤩🤤🤤 If you're still looking for proofreading / a sounding board, I'm interested. Just note that as a Sailor myself, there are periods when I will be incommunicado for long lengths when I have no service... 🚢⚓

4/21/24, 5:14 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I'm guessing those stars means you enjoyed the chapter sailor? I am open to having another guy, and a Sailor who can give me some details, be a sounding board. If you send me a forum message or DM me on twitter/tumblr we'll connect.

4/21/24, 2:32 PM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) Yes indeed, I very much enjoyed the chapter! This story is excellent! 😛😛😛😛

4/21/24, 3:07 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) glad to hear it
4/21/24, 1:59 PM
Wow, now this is an amazing love story, around hypnosis without any fantastic elements but so much fantasy and romance. I love every part of this! A true masterpiece!
hairyartist
4/21/24, 1:33 PM
I love it man, thank you!