Recent Comments

4/21/24, 1:16 AM
Wowza!! Really excited for this to continue. 😛😛😛😛
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
4/21/24, 1:10 AM
Goddamn! I want to be Timmy so badly!
4/17/24, 3:52 PM
You are the best at these dystopian style stories of unwilling transformation. This had it all for me: rubber suits, boots, helmets, mind-wipes. Please write more!

4/21/24, 1:04 AM
@[Yorksbiker08](/user/show/1049586) I'm glad you've enjoyed it :grin: in all honesty, I've been lacking inspiration lately :/
4/20/24, 10:11 PM
Wish this was continued
Zander
4/20/24, 3:30 PM
P.S: I'm currently giving this story a 6.5 out of 10 because I like the dirt, darkness, and length of the chapters. Let's see how the epilogue of this story ends. So far, for me personally, this story is a mediocre but good porn story. For which you can just relax, jerk off and forget, and which you don’t want to go back and re-read. But the ending can change everything and at the end I will give my personal assessment of this story for myself)

4/20/24, 4:24 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Loving the analysis! Hope you dig the epilogue. It’s mostly there to fill in those gaps you mentioned and see where Eddie is one year later (he’s def not brainless)

4/20/24, 9:25 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Yes! Epilogue to look forward to!
Anonymous
4/20/24, 4:21 PM
Don’t change a thing it’s perfect!

4/20/24, 4:26 PM
@Anonymous Oh no worries! I never let the comments truly affect my vision. And I knew, from the start, where I wanted this to end. It was the ending that inspired the whole thing!

Zander
4/20/24, 7:34 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Very correct words. I believe that as the author conceived a certain story, so he should finish it. Because this is the story of the author himself and not the reader. If someone wants the ending of a story that he or a certain group of people will like, then he should write a similar story himself but with a good ending. In this I support such story authors, I hope there will be more of you in the future. I myself want to write a story (I already have several plots in my head with endings), but unfortunately English is not my native language, there may be mistakes in writing and I don’t have much time yet 😓 connections with work and study. But I hope in I will be able to realize my ideas in the future.

4/20/24, 8:55 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Your English is very good! I hope you don't let that be a hindrance to explore your talents!
anonymous
4/20/24, 8:20 PM
Really like that Machine, and what it represents, no matter how many times Dunc is in it. Also the control collars from two chapters ago. There's a line in here where Mandrake says "as of right now, I’m done with old-fashioned pendants and sweettalk." More of where that came from, FreeThinker, in this or some future series. It's darker but hotter. Very hot scene when the wrestler resists, is forced under control by the Machine, and then Mandrake sexually controls him while mocking his previous resistance. Maybe just slow down the pace a bit there and bring out more the contrast between before versus after. Would be hot to see Mandrake take a special request from the senator in part IV to watch as two fresh and resistant athletes are converted one at a time to the senator's personal service with the Machine. Hot stuff as the second is aware and watching as the first is Machined and then compelled to serve.
4/20/24, 7:47 PM
This could have gone on like "Top Dawg" or "Parker Brothers". You've even worked an "Eden" reference in there. Great work!
4/20/24, 3:57 PM
Is this a reupload? Or did you post this elsewhere a while ago? Cause I've definitely read this before

Anonymous
4/20/24, 6:07 PM
@[Seakinklets](/user/show/10020055) I posted this on my FurAffinity account long ago. But I’m trying to revise and add to it before posting it on here on my GSS account in a meager attempt to keep myself at least somewhat relevant.
Zander
4/20/24, 3:40 PM
One of my favorite authors and some of my favorite stories with answers to all questions and a great plot, unexpected turns, events and eroticism). I wish there were more authors like you.

4/20/24, 4:16 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) You're such a sweetheart. ❤️ I'm glad to have you take these journeys with me.