Recent Comments

4/21/24, 6:57 AM
The last line leaves it such a mystery who was really in control. Was Bryan secretly hypnotizing Sam to be his dominant and secretly craving to be a slut the whole time, or was Sam truly in control. Love this concept. Great read.
4/21/24, 1:53 AM
Just sent the epilogue to my proofreader/editor! Hopefully up in the next couple days. <3
4/21/24, 1:16 AM
Wowza!! Really excited for this to continue. 😛😛😛😛
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
4/21/24, 1:10 AM
Goddamn! I want to be Timmy so badly!
4/17/24, 3:52 PM
You are the best at these dystopian style stories of unwilling transformation. This had it all for me: rubber suits, boots, helmets, mind-wipes. Please write more!

4/21/24, 1:04 AM
@[Yorksbiker08](/user/show/1049586) I'm glad you've enjoyed it :grin: in all honesty, I've been lacking inspiration lately :/
4/20/24, 10:11 PM
Wish this was continued
Zander
4/20/24, 3:30 PM
P.S: I'm currently giving this story a 6.5 out of 10 because I like the dirt, darkness, and length of the chapters. Let's see how the epilogue of this story ends. So far, for me personally, this story is a mediocre but good porn story. For which you can just relax, jerk off and forget, and which you don’t want to go back and re-read. But the ending can change everything and at the end I will give my personal assessment of this story for myself)

4/20/24, 4:24 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Loving the analysis! Hope you dig the epilogue. It’s mostly there to fill in those gaps you mentioned and see where Eddie is one year later (he’s def not brainless)

4/20/24, 9:25 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Yes! Epilogue to look forward to!
Anonymous
4/20/24, 4:21 PM
Don’t change a thing it’s perfect!

4/20/24, 4:26 PM
@Anonymous Oh no worries! I never let the comments truly affect my vision. And I knew, from the start, where I wanted this to end. It was the ending that inspired the whole thing!

Zander
4/20/24, 7:34 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Very correct words. I believe that as the author conceived a certain story, so he should finish it. Because this is the story of the author himself and not the reader. If someone wants the ending of a story that he or a certain group of people will like, then he should write a similar story himself but with a good ending. In this I support such story authors, I hope there will be more of you in the future. I myself want to write a story (I already have several plots in my head with endings), but unfortunately English is not my native language, there may be mistakes in writing and I don’t have much time yet 😓 connections with work and study. But I hope in I will be able to realize my ideas in the future.

4/20/24, 8:55 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Your English is very good! I hope you don't let that be a hindrance to explore your talents!