Goddamn! I want to be Timmy so badly!

You are the best at these dystopian style stories of unwilling transformation. This had it all for me: rubber suits, boots, helmets, mind-wipes. Please write more!

Wish this was continued

P.S: I'm currently giving this story a 6.5 out of 10 because I like the dirt, darkness, and length of the chapters. Let's see how the epilogue of this story ends. So far, for me personally, this story is a mediocre but good porn story. For which you can just relax, jerk off and forget, and which you don’t want to go back and re-read. But the ending can change everything and at the end I will give my personal assessment of this story for myself)

Don’t change a thing it’s perfect!

Really like that Machine, and what it represents, no matter how many times Dunc is in it. Also the control collars from two chapters ago. There's a line in here where Mandrake says "as of right now, I’m done with old-fashioned pendants and sweettalk." More of where that came from, FreeThinker, in this or some future series. It's darker but hotter. Very hot scene when the wrestler resists, is forced under control by the Machine, and then Mandrake sexually controls him while mocking his previous resistance. Maybe just slow down the pace a bit there and bring out more the contrast between before versus after. Would be hot to see Mandrake take a special request from the senator in part IV to watch as two fresh and resistant athletes are converted one at a time to the senator's personal service with the Machine. Hot stuff as the second is aware and watching as the first is Machined and then compelled to serve.

This could have gone on like "Top Dawg" or "Parker Brothers". You've even worked an "Eden" reference in there. Great work!

Is this a reupload? Or did you post this elsewhere a while ago? Cause I've definitely read this before

One of my favorite authors and some of my favorite stories with answers to all questions and a great plot, unexpected turns, events and eroticism). I wish there were more authors like you.

A very good porno-erotic story with a bad ending. Cons: 1. It's unlikely that Yusuf's trio of twins would be able to catch up with Caleb. 2. This is the main villain of the story, Yusuf (who supposedly, in his words, wanted a family and to be happy). Very weak and stupid motivation! No one forced you not to start a family and not be happy, right? this was not mentioned in the story. After all, everyone builds their own happiness and destiny because everything is always in the hands of a person who builds his own destiny. I don't think that by enslaving someone else's family and betraying their minds, you will actually be happy about it (because you know that without your intervention in their minds this would not have happened and they would never have loved you. Although I think that Yusufu in fact, he doesn’t give a damn about it and he knows it, because he is a very big hypocrite and selfish and stupid too, unfortunately (because an intelligent person is unlikely to control the consciousness of every person he likes, and even more so by physically changing his appearance, because this will be very noticeable). After all, luck is not a constant thing. and luck will not always favor you and the glove may either break, or not work at the right moment, or something else may happen that the glove may not help him and then Yusuf will come to a natural end. Although the story will most likely end with the natural “victory” of Yusuf. In the future, I think he will have huge problems, because there is such a thing as Karma, and it always comes back. Let's not forget that you will never build happiness on the grief and suffering of others, and the evil you create will come back to you later. As a character and a villain, I don't like Yusuf because he is very stupid and poorly written. It's strange that he was able to invent such an invention, but could not have his own family who truly loved him. Honestly, who could help Yusuf with this invention? maybe some demon gave him the drawings of this invention in a dream. In short, I'm looking forward to the continuation of this story in the form of an epilogue and hope that it answers all the questions in the story. Oh yeah, I almost forgot about Eddie, I feel really bad for him as a character (losing his entire family on Thanksgiving) but I believe that Karma will punish Yusuf at some point in the future. I just hope that the epilogue tells us about all the characters and what happened to them next.