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4/19/24, 11:38 PM
I've loved everything about this story. If I had Yusuf's power, I couldn't promise I'd be entirely wholesome with how I'd use it. The taking of Caleb, Lyle, and Hank was great. Makes me think of the Wasfi household as an Olive Garden ("when you're here, you're family" πŸ˜‚). Ed is such a great author. I appreciated all the tiny details and thought put into the writing. Like, the story is told through Eddie's eyes, and when Eddie is reverted back to original Edgar (before any of Yusuf's changes), he begins referring to Petey and Johnny again as just Pete and John...weird example, i know, but i was impressed. Also loved that, just when we thought we knew everything about the gloves, we find out they can clone a person (Eddie and his clone talking at the same time/having the same mannerisms was a nice touch) AND revert any changes made to someone. People might disagree, but I loved how Pops is now the opposite of the kind, caring man he was and openly insults his sons (he could spank me any day 😈). I love that Freddie and new Eddie get off on his and Yusuf's abuse, and how, even though they are what would be considered perfect specimens in society, they are the "ugly" ones in the family. Everyone in this story comes out the other end exactly the opposite of how they were, and it's very cathartic, IMO. There's no right/wrong way to write a story, so why not go against the norm?

4/20/24, 4:13 AM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) You’re so kind πŸ₯°
4/20/24, 2:53 AM
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4/20/24, 2:18 AM
Amazing story as always, I think edlams stories always capture what kind control is, which at its core is dark. So well written and hot but dark and unapologetic. Freaking love it
4/20/24, 12:07 AM
I hope things get restored.
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4/19/24, 11:59 PM
I wish I could attend a party like this. Derek Tyson is fucking hot, and I would love to inhale that massive cock and swallow his juicy load of cum.
4/19/24, 10:43 PM
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4/18/24, 1:59 PM
You're going to leave it there!? That is so mean! You did that on purpose! But what an unexpected way to have Hank get rid of his conditioning. And his layered scheme to beat the boys. He is definitely a supervillain without being a supervillain. Which means I bet his play with Travis is also just another ploy. So that just leaves what impact Rodriguez will have on the outcome.

4/18/24, 2:30 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) It _is_ kinda mean, isn't it :3 You could say it's on purpose, but this is just where the deciding factor for the endings kicks in. Rather than carrying on and running into one of the endings here I thought it would be better to have a 'clean cut',... you know, so I don't have to start with "You remember that thing that happened back there? Well, imagine it didn't,..." What happens next all comes down to Henry's plan. Who goes where, and why,... such a small decision with huge consequences! Has Henry learned his lessons, or is he as bad a student as Ernst claims?

4/18/24, 11:16 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Definitely on purpose, but for the right reasons. But still that cliffhanger! So many combinations on how it could go down. Does Hank find Nick or Henry? What about Rodriguez? Does anyone double team? What real traps does Hank have in play? What punishment will Travis eventually get? What role does the drone squad have? I'm going to enjoy all these different endings. Though, I am curious. Hank is largely anonymous. He could disappear and have Ernst be the Tri-Hard to take the fall just as he planned. But if he wants to ride off into the sunset for a kinky paradise; why leave the most of the drones? This might simply be because of his standards. But if he has access to the tech, why not improve the drones more to his liking now that he is free from the Tri-Hard persona? So many of these drones were the just the type of guys he would turn anyway in his pervious life.

4/19/24, 3:08 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Curiosity, eh,...? Okay, just a few answers to avoid any overt spoilers; Firstly; Hank doesn't like the drones at all. They've been useful, but they don't appeal to his tastes at all. Even the half-dozen men he'd already taken aside and trained to be his bedroom statue slaves are a sore point for him, since he could simply _demand_ their obedience and their programming compelled them to enjoy their duties. Short of removing all compulsion, there isn't any way to make the 'drones' suit Hank's tastes. Secondly; Hank doesn't care about their numbers either, since he prefers a more _personal_ connection to his boys. He knows each of them better than they know themselves and _that's_ what sets them down the path to serving him. He enjoys the chase, the challenge and the moment of victory that comes from showing his boys their proper place in the world. Finally; Yes, you may have touched on the final reason Hank is 'okay' with potentially tossing away the drone army so easily. That's all I can say ;)

4/19/24, 10:15 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Thanks for that insight. And everything you have spoken of does ring bells with what is in the story and in other responses. I just find it...premature for Hank to disregard the drones so quickly. Even wasteful. Its a true Master and Slave dynamic that he wants. I just believe they have more value than being disposable. But I digress. You have a great story going. I am going to enjoy all the varied endings that you make.
4/19/24, 10:08 PM
I love your stories. They always mess with me in the right way. I just felt a little sorry for Ed. I didn't expect Yusuf to leave him out of this new and "loving" family. I'm curious to know what will happen to him now and what Yusuf will turn him into.
4/19/24, 9:53 PM
Bro no, I felt so bad reading that ending, like yes this is so mess up since the beginning but like I just want to feel satisfaction with the mess up things not this heartbreaking ending, like Ed deserves at least to have the ending of his brother and wife
4/19/24, 9:38 PM
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