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4/19/24, 3:22 AM
Fantastic work! A good old-fashioned hypnosis story. I went back and checked once I realized what the trigger phrases were--you did a great job putting them into the story just enough to be unobtrusive, but it's clear that it's how Kevin's power works. I also loved Connor gaining more swagger as Bruce lost his--such a cool swap. All in all, a great story! :D

4/19/24, 4:36 AM
Thanks @[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832)! I’m really stoked you like it, and that the trigger phrases weren’t too obvious. I’ve got to admit, I had another section of the story planned out (Eric and Kieran), but once the power swap was done it felt… done. I’m glad it feels like a good resolution.
Apr 16, 2024
4/19/24, 4:17 AM
Great story
4/19/24, 3:47 AM
This one's beyond fantastic
Apr 16, 2024
Anonymous
4/19/24, 3:28 AM
LOVED IT!!!!
4/19/24, 3:26 AM
Can't wait for more. Please continue.
Anonymous
4/19/24, 3:19 AM
I am loving this. Keep going!!!
4/19/24, 3:01 AM
Excellent beginning! Can't wait for more.

4/19/24, 3:18 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) I'm glas you liked it, I do have some plans in mind 😁.
4/19/24, 3:14 AM
Holy fuck this was sensational.
4/19/24, 3:07 AM
Always a great story.
4/18/24, 10:26 PM
Fantastic work, and super unique! I do kind of want to see more of Kev's escapades, the way the hypnosis worked into this story was really hot. Especially with Connor's semi-awareness of being mindfucked.

4/18/24, 11:59 PM
Thank you @[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663)! I wrote this as a one-off, but I’ll admit that I’m tempted to write more about Kevin. What’s going to happen with Bruce’s buddies? What’s Bruce been doing to Connor, even as Connor remains oblivious? Just how far can Kevin go when he hypnotizes a man?