Recent Comments

4/18/24, 9:30 PM
Very hot and sexy! I like how he is a dominant, I hope that stays true and both brother and dad become his subby bottom boys. Sexy set up. Maybe can can use his power to get it so they have lots of money and don't need to work and so can fuck around a lot.
4/18/24, 8:18 PM
Ohhh. Great second chapter. Now I’m curious about this Replica company.
4/13/24, 9:44 AM
Noooo! Next punishment is getting rid of DOWN TIME :wink:

4/18/24, 2:34 PM
@[djinnie](/user/show/16878) But, the narrative tension! ;)

4/18/24, 7:51 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) What better tension than an always ready and needy cock that can't be satisfied for more than a few seconds? :innocent:
TW
4/18/24, 6:21 PM
AHHH, what a cliff hanger!! Excited to see how the group will divide and what that combination’ll look like for the good end and for the tru— I mean, bad end!

4/18/24, 7:46 PM
@TW Thanks :D All endings are true in their own ways,... I don't think any version of Henry or Nick would ever want to change their fates, whether that be the time Nick became **Tri-Hard's** boy-toy or the pair of them became hulking, drooling pets for Hank. Every ending is a happy ending when you get to live in blissful obedience!
4/18/24, 7:23 PM
I’m really enjoying this. If I could make a critique, it would be made hotter if each transformation was written with a different point of view. As is, they all read very mechanically and it feels like I’m rereading the same thing each time. Maybe try to get in the characters’ heads more while it’s happening to differentiate them more. For example, with Luis, you could detail his horror as the smells overpower him and the cum seeps into his skin. Describe the horny disbelief as his average cock explodes before his eyes into a swollen veiny monstrosity that throbs with an aggression he’s never felt before. Mental descriptions of the characters will help put the reader into the moment.
4/18/24, 1:47 PM
I really enjoy these. And your writing has improved too. Keep them coming.

4/18/24, 6:10 PM
@[RedPandaCat](/user/show/10001176) I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the comment.
4/16/24, 6:32 PM
Love this series, I’m a fan of demonic corruption and transformation of the good guy. Thanks for sharing this wonderful stories that hit many kinks of me.

Pcm
4/18/24, 3:58 PM
@[Dice](/user/show/75600) Thank you! I'm really glad to know that other people do share my fetishes!
Pcm
4/18/24, 3:55 PM
This is hot! I always when a duo joins the side of evil one after another!
4/18/24, 3:39 PM
SOOOOOOO GOOD! Please PLEASE write many more chapters of this! 😍🥵🥵🥵🥵
4/12/24, 11:13 PM
This is, to this day, the best chapter of any story on this site, in my humble opinion.

4/18/24, 2:59 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Aw! The compliment of a good writer is specially precious. Thanks. :)