Recent Comments

4/18/24, 7:23 PM
I’m really enjoying this. If I could make a critique, it would be made hotter if each transformation was written with a different point of view. As is, they all read very mechanically and it feels like I’m rereading the same thing each time. Maybe try to get in the characters’ heads more while it’s happening to differentiate them more. For example, with Luis, you could detail his horror as the smells overpower him and the cum seeps into his skin. Describe the horny disbelief as his average cock explodes before his eyes into a swollen veiny monstrosity that throbs with an aggression he’s never felt before. Mental descriptions of the characters will help put the reader into the moment.
4/18/24, 1:47 PM
I really enjoy these. And your writing has improved too. Keep them coming.

4/18/24, 6:10 PM
@[RedPandaCat](/user/show/10001176) I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the comment.
4/16/24, 6:32 PM
Love this series, I’m a fan of demonic corruption and transformation of the good guy. Thanks for sharing this wonderful stories that hit many kinks of me.

Pcm
4/18/24, 3:58 PM
@[Dice](/user/show/75600) Thank you! I'm really glad to know that other people do share my fetishes!
Pcm
4/18/24, 3:55 PM
This is hot! I always when a duo joins the side of evil one after another!
4/18/24, 3:39 PM
SOOOOOOO GOOD! Please PLEASE write many more chapters of this! 😍🥵🥵🥵🥵
4/12/24, 11:13 PM
This is, to this day, the best chapter of any story on this site, in my humble opinion.

4/18/24, 2:59 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Aw! The compliment of a good writer is specially precious. Thanks. :)
4/14/24, 2:54 PM
LOVING this. Next chapter will be insane!

4/18/24, 2:41 PM
@[gotacoolname](/user/show/234002) No promises on the level of sanity. ;)
4/13/24, 5:31 PM
I love how it starts subtly and builds. Excellent chapter. Can't wait for what's next!

4/18/24, 2:35 PM
@[SwimJock](/user/show/39947) Thanks, man! Glad you’re enjoying it.
4/13/24, 1:14 PM
Well done, great story !

4/18/24, 2:34 PM
@[eastbay](/user/show/1576204) My blushes. :)
4/13/24, 1:10 AM
'WHAT EVER SOMEONE SAYS ABOUT YOU BECOMES TRUE' sounds hot !!!!

4/18/24, 2:32 PM
@[little tiny tim](/user/show/14101) As is often the case, hot but more challenging to write. ;)