Recent Comments

4/18/24, 10:26 PM
Fantastic work, and super unique! I do kind of want to see more of Kev's escapades, the way the hypnosis worked into this story was really hot. Especially with Connor's semi-awareness of being mindfucked.

4/18/24, 11:59 PM
Thank you @[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663)! I wrote this as a one-off, but I’ll admit that I’m tempted to write more about Kevin. What’s going to happen with Bruce’s buddies? What’s Bruce been doing to Connor, even as Connor remains oblivious? Just how far can Kevin go when he hypnotizes a man?
4/18/24, 8:27 PM
This is so hot. Great work

4/18/24, 11:56 PM
Thanks @[texas95](/user/show/10020267)! The core fantasy comes out of a request on the forum. Once I let it in my head I couldn’t get rid of it without writing.
Anonymous
4/18/24, 5:11 PM
Excellent work Thanks!

4/18/24, 11:55 PM
Thank you for reading!
4/18/24, 11:07 PM
Thanks! Chapter 2 is awaitng approval.
4/18/24, 9:30 PM
Very hot and sexy! I like how he is a dominant, I hope that stays true and both brother and dad become his subby bottom boys. Sexy set up. Maybe can can use his power to get it so they have lots of money and don't need to work and so can fuck around a lot.
4/18/24, 8:18 PM
Ohhh. Great second chapter. Now I’m curious about this Replica company.
4/13/24, 9:44 AM
Noooo! Next punishment is getting rid of DOWN TIME :wink:

4/18/24, 2:34 PM
@[djinnie](/user/show/16878) But, the narrative tension! ;)

4/18/24, 7:51 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) What better tension than an always ready and needy cock that can't be satisfied for more than a few seconds? :innocent:
TW
4/18/24, 6:21 PM
AHHH, what a cliff hanger!! Excited to see how the group will divide and what that combination’ll look like for the good end and for the tru— I mean, bad end!

4/18/24, 7:46 PM
@TW Thanks :D All endings are true in their own ways,... I don't think any version of Henry or Nick would ever want to change their fates, whether that be the time Nick became **Tri-Hard's** boy-toy or the pair of them became hulking, drooling pets for Hank. Every ending is a happy ending when you get to live in blissful obedience!
4/18/24, 7:23 PM
I’m really enjoying this. If I could make a critique, it would be made hotter if each transformation was written with a different point of view. As is, they all read very mechanically and it feels like I’m rereading the same thing each time. Maybe try to get in the characters’ heads more while it’s happening to differentiate them more. For example, with Luis, you could detail his horror as the smells overpower him and the cum seeps into his skin. Describe the horny disbelief as his average cock explodes before his eyes into a swollen veiny monstrosity that throbs with an aggression he’s never felt before. Mental descriptions of the characters will help put the reader into the moment.
4/18/24, 1:47 PM
I really enjoy these. And your writing has improved too. Keep them coming.

4/18/24, 6:10 PM
@[RedPandaCat](/user/show/10001176) I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the comment.