Recent Comments

4/16/24, 11:25 PM
Wow. Fantastic start. I hope you do continue. So many possibilities. Like maybe we can get Teddy’s story?
4/16/24, 11:24 PM
Very hot!
Apr 16, 2024
Maximus
4/16/24, 10:02 PM
The last line is interesting.
4/16/24, 4:56 PM
Ohh, this is very interesting. Im intrigue.

4/16/24, 9:28 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you for taking the time to read it.
4/16/24, 9:27 PM
Would be cool to have a version where Brad gets what he wanted
Feb 15, 2024
4/16/24, 9:13 PM
incest tends to skeek me out, but this was well written and turned me on.
4/16/24, 9:03 PM
I echo the other comments, I really enjoyed this but I want it to be longer! I want more transformations.
Apr 16, 2024
4/16/24, 8:46 PM
Great stuff
Art
4/16/24, 7:53 PM
Good story, but it's been months when will you post more?
4/16/24, 7:36 PM
Incredible series. But, I want to point out that there is still room for more in this thread. The choices thread tied up nicely, but there is further potential for this storyline. How does Ethan respond when he learns that Brad is Kal's complete slave? Can Kal be persuaded to set Brad free? Is a free Brad sufficiently changed that he remains as Kal's slave? Does he become Kal's lover? Does Kal take Brad to the gym to let him experience complete sluthood? I would love a chapter that includes Brad experiencing the joy of being a complete muscle slut. Definitely more material if you have any creative urges left for this series.