Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/15/24, 2:10 PM
Just read the story. Hope to read more soon

4/16/24, 4:06 AM
@Anonymous Sloowww progress but I plan to continue. At least 1 or 2 more chapters I think. It depends
4/16/24, 3:41 AM
Awww. What a cute ending. I prefer this throuple ending. And even Kal gets a somewhat happy ending, thanks to Brad. I was just hoping the sex scene we got for this chapter is with Brads actual body and not just a magically transformed Kal. Its also interesting that Brad wished to be a versed-bottom, rather than just an actual verse. I guess that week long bottom experience stayed with him. Also, its interesting that both endings have Brad ended up being owned by someone. I guess thats what Brad needed, someone to own him. Enjoyed reading this series and hope to read more stories from you.
4/15/24, 11:54 PM
I have been on the edge of my seat for this! Haven't even read it yet, but so excited!!!!!

Anonymous
4/16/24, 12:39 AM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Hope it lives up to the hype. (Oops. Didn't realize I got logged out )

4/16/24, 3:08 AM
Loving the character development. Totally know what Travis means about wanting to *be* one of them.
4/16/24, 2:43 AM
Great work on this whole story! I really love how, whichever way things go down, Brad and Kal both end up satisfied, if not exactly happy, with the outcome. Both endings feel equally true to the story as a whole, which is really impressive!
Sss
4/16/24, 12:55 AM
Definitely prefer this ending. I also love the aesthetic of the magic.
4/15/24, 8:11 PM
Glad to see Acorn back! A short one, though

4/16/24, 12:40 AM
@[tomtales](/user/show/10001207) The next few will be a little short, but they should also be posted in relatively short succession. I had some specific story beats I wanted to hit with each one.
4/16/24, 12:20 AM
Such an amazing story. Both endings were hot, but yeah, I liked Brad’s happiness in this ending best. I just hate saying goodbye to these characters, even the (slightly) improved Kal. Lol.
Anon
4/16/24, 12:09 AM
I rather the mistake ending. This one is too sweet. Mistakes gets all the hot hypno stuff plus Drake also get mind fucked for a while. It's a shame Karl doesn't keep him around as a pet though, but for the sake of plot consistency he had to leave I guess
4/15/24, 1:53 PM
Missed you! Great story! Can't wait till he take Beck and his team members just to protect himself

4/15/24, 10:57 PM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) Will he make that choice? Or give up his abilities to protect them? Only time will tell. But glad you enjoyed the story so far.
New Fan
4/15/24, 10:07 PM
Fuck! Didn’t expect Mr Mandrake to have this elaborate operation and its hot af! I love the cheesy b-rated lines and how the lax-bros are helpless to recite them!