Recent Comments

4/15/24, 6:19 PM
Love the premise, feels a little rushed to me tho.
Anonymous
4/15/24, 6:09 PM
I think I prefer this ending, but both of them were hot. Thank you for this story
Ty Bond
4/15/24, 5:31 PM
Great story I hope you come back to the bar and characters
4/15/24, 4:39 PM
Please try and write something yourself, even if you are not confident in your writing abilities! It's certainly going to be much better of this soulless slop, believe me!
This Can't Be Happening
4/15/24, 4:24 PM
Every single AI story involving any emotion at all ends with the protagonists learning a valuable lesson about believing in yourself and inner beauty. Wow. We live in incredible times. The future of writing is preschool cartoons.
4/15/24, 4:03 PM
This story is a good reminder to filter out ai generated stories.
Anonymous
4/15/24, 2:11 PM
So hard to read this declarative writing. It's like reading instructions to assemble a piece of furniture. Horrible...
This Can't Be Happening
4/15/24, 3:47 AM
I love that the store owner is just like (quietly) "what the fuck, what the fuck, what the fuuuuuuuck"

4/15/24, 1:18 PM
@This Can't Be Happening Thank you!
TheAuthor
4/15/24, 1:03 PM
This was great. I like how you kept it simple all throughout. I appreciate stories that go exactly where you expect them to go. Good job!

4/15/24, 1:17 PM
@[TheAuthor](/user/show/678335) I appreciate your feedback very much. Thanks.
Anonymous
4/15/24, 10:03 AM
I love the story about father and son in relationships very much. I hope you can write more about it. Changing the age and body is also good.

4/15/24, 12:25 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I love father son relations very much too. You can find more about it in two of my stories: Testos Legacy and Family bonds from the stars.