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Feb 3, 2020
4/15/24, 8:46 PM
Really hot! Would love a continuation where Ricky smells shoes or socks or gets right in between Jay's toes for full smelly action!
Anonymous
4/15/24, 8:07 PM
Ow. This ending hurt. It was also quite hot at parts, a testament to good writing. Will be revisiting this story a lot

Anonymous
4/15/24, 8:08 PM
Gotta wonder how Ethan would react if he ever came by to check on things. A potential epilogue, perhaps?
4/15/24, 6:25 PM
This is the first ending i read and im guessing this is the bad choice ending. I mean its alright that Brad stayed gay but its only for Kal though. I guess this is the good ending for Kal, he can become a straight warlock so that he could have a child. And i still hate Drake, too bad Brad removed the turned on torture curse. He should have it even after Kal made him go away. He needs to suffer and not to use his gigantic magical schlong. I might wait a bit before i read ending two. I need to digest this a little bit. But all i can say this is a nice tragic ending for Brad.
4/15/24, 6:19 PM
Love the premise, feels a little rushed to me tho.
Anonymous
4/15/24, 6:09 PM
I think I prefer this ending, but both of them were hot. Thank you for this story
Ty Bond
4/15/24, 5:31 PM
Great story I hope you come back to the bar and characters
4/15/24, 4:39 PM
Please try and write something yourself, even if you are not confident in your writing abilities! It's certainly going to be much better of this soulless slop, believe me!
This Can't Be Happening
4/15/24, 4:24 PM
Every single AI story involving any emotion at all ends with the protagonists learning a valuable lesson about believing in yourself and inner beauty. Wow. We live in incredible times. The future of writing is preschool cartoons.
4/15/24, 4:03 PM
This story is a good reminder to filter out ai generated stories.
Anonymous
4/15/24, 2:11 PM
So hard to read this declarative writing. It's like reading instructions to assemble a piece of furniture. Horrible...