Oh my freaking goodness, this is so freaking good!!!! CHOICES MAKE A MAN! And the mistakes influence those choices, sometimes unexpectedly. ❤️🖤❤️🖤❤️🖤

how so i sign up to be number 36

Oh, AI, just naming the chapters exactly what part of the story structure they represent. Never change lmao

Both parts of this story are so great! It’s so well-written, fun concept and exceptionally hot. It was a great read because it felt fresh and fun. I loved the joy the characters felt about their bodies and the attraction to smaller guys. I’d love to see another part, but if we don’t, I’m happy we got these two chapters. They both made me cum!

Damn, man! This chapter was amazing! We always want to know what is going on inside the head of a hypnotized character. Dunc's self-awareness while also living inside his hypnotized reality as if it were perfectly normal, was handled really well. And what was going on in Dunc's head was just flat-out hot! By the end of the chapter, I had plenty of evidence that I am NOT a cum-locked boy! :grin:

I was wondering how you were going to handle the enslaving of the Chevrolet men. It looks like inspiration struck and you found a clever way to do it. This really worked well. Excellent job! Bringing in the gardner was a great idea. And I loved the maids watching these prideful men get taken down from their pedestals.

Dude this was one of the best stories I've read on the site as someone who loves hypermasculinity, jocks, and muscle. Excellent writing, great and individualized characters, and VERY sexy. All the characters are really fun and likeable. I really liked Chase's growth with his bicuriosity, and his relationship with Oliver is really well developed and natural. Benito being that cocky stud on campus who annoys you but you always fantasize about. Eric was really sexy and I liked his bluntness and his banter with Benito. I also found Richard to be a very amusing character, he reminded me of Prince Wu from the Legend of Korra. Chase and Oliver's talk and kiss in the sauna- so sexy and natural. Eric and Patrick sucking Benito's cock was hot especially as it was their first time doing something with another guy. Eric and Benito fucking Patrick was also amazing. The BEST scene is the locker room orgy before the big game. So fucking beautiful. The tension building up as Chase calls Oliver over and begins sucking him as everyone watches. Eric fucking Benito. Chase licking Oliver's musky pits as he fucks him. I nutted when all the football jocks nutted on Chase and covered him in sperm. Fuck man. I'm not sure if the loophole to coach's rule was supposed to be obvious to the reader, since I assumed his rule said "girlfriend" to generally mean partner, so Chase revealing the orgy inducing loophole did surprise me and get my heart pumping. I also really enjoyed Eric and Benito as Asian and Latino characters, both had unique traits and were important to the story. Many authors (white) really don't know how to write poc's without disrespecting them in one way or another so it was really nice to see. I liked that Eric was the more masculine and assertive one in his relationship. Since Chase's ethnicity was never imagined, I envision him as this tall beefy stud from my gym who to me looks Latino (and who I think definitely looks like a football player). If I had some suggestions, I would like more emphasis on pecs! More pecs, more armpits. The story mentioned musk and sweat a lot which was good though. Overall one of the best stories here. PLEASE, consider making a sequel. I really want to see how Chase and Oliver's relationship grows.

love this series, can’t wait for next chapter 😃

Love it……want more….

Would love to have this continue….what if they had children &/or gotten fat? What would become of them? Think of this as prompts/interesting ideas to continue.