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4/14/24, 8:22 AM
Sooo HOT! Every detail in this story has been so much more than Wonderful. Well Done!!
4/14/24, 5:16 AM
As with BlondieBoy, this pushed a lot of my buttons as well. Mind control, brainwashing, hypnosis, and whatever other seemingly realistic techniques for being dominated and controlled are all hot topics for me. The level of mind control you portrayed and the words you used to bring that to life was a key feature for me. You used enough realistic hypnosis wording which helps me fall into the story and follow Lukas into deeper and deeper trance. Again like BlondieBoy, I would have much preferred if you had found a happier motivation for the therapist to enjoy his job, so that you could have left out the physical and psychological violence. Still, a story I enjoyed and would read again. Thanks!
4/14/24, 4:03 AM
Are we going to see AKA levels of growth in the next sector? *rubs hands together and chuckles evilly*
4/14/24, 1:27 AM
Make the team hypno the coach and the Mc will control them all. Nice start!
Hello?
4/13/24, 8:17 PM
Did any thing happen? Why you stopped making more chapters?
4/13/24, 7:01 PM
Can't wait for more
4/13/24, 11:23 AM
I admit it, I waited until the whole thing was posted before I read it. It sure was fun to revisit the brothers and I wasn't surprised that Little Budd created catastrophic shenanigans. I enjoyed the throwback to the original cum hot tub debacle a great deal. Smokey is my favorite of the new characters!

4/13/24, 6:29 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) "Catastrophic Shenanigans" should be the title of my memoir! Glad you liked it!
4/13/24, 6:02 PM
Love the twist in the end!
4/13/24, 4:37 PM
PLEASE continue this