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sweet potato pie
4/10/24, 5:59 PM
though I wished for more horny scenes, I loved that this story is so, with a lack of word, plot driven! I just love the intricacies that this series has and I want this to be published, genuinely -S.P.P,

4/12/24, 1:20 AM
@sweet potato pie It's already at novel length. At the rate @NeonDemon is spooling this out, he may have a trilogy by the time it ends. :heart_eyes:
4/11/24, 11:38 PM
Please keep him as a cum locked boy! Keep him so needy and wanting to cum but obeys his orders and programming. He is well on his way to be an ideal slave and sextoy.

Anonymous
4/12/24, 12:11 AM
@[Marik29] I agree wholeheartedly! Duncan is much hotter being a horny cum-locked boy with nothing but sex on his mind. It’s so hot what you did to him and I think it would be so hot if Dr. Mandrake convinces Dunc’s mind to want and accept this as his permanent state from now on
4/11/24, 2:54 PM
I prefer a third option: Experiences Maketh the Man as it encompasses both your mistakes and choices. It will also allow Brad to get the ending he _deserves_!

Sss
4/11/24, 11:44 PM
@[QuinnDnvr](/user/show/13929) ^
4/10/24, 8:18 PM
I'll vote for choice. And even better: I vote that you create two separate pathes! This story is growing from being hot to becoming absolutely amazing. You even manage to add some unexpected depth I've never expected!

Sss
4/11/24, 11:44 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) ^
Feb 7, 2021
4/11/24, 10:09 PM
This is hot!
4/11/24, 9:50 PM
🍆💦💦thanks Jack. I needed that.
4/11/24, 8:51 PM
This is definitely the weirdest story I've ever read, here or anywhere else. I enjoyed it though. Crapping out your brains is new, too, as so many happy people around here have ejaculated or peed their mind out, but I can't remember anyone messing their diaper with it.... Cruel and fun!
4/11/24, 7:45 PM
Excellent series. The fact that you had me rooting *against* a transformation into a bimbo femboy is a testament to your writing! But maybe Brad can keep that version of himself around for later 👀 Mistakes sounds more fun!
4/11/24, 4:48 PM
Based on the description I was so looking forward to this. But I found it really hard to read. Not in the staring into the ringmaster eyes fun sort of way either.

4/11/24, 4:51 PM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) I'm sorry to hear that! For the sake of constructive criticism, was it the themes present in the tale or the actual prose of the story? Thanks for the feedback!

4/11/24, 6:44 PM
@[Tom Gungy](/user/show/129727) It was the referring to lots of things as kanada. By the time I got to the circus I was confused and who and what was who and what. Sorry!!!!!

4/11/24, 7:07 PM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) No need for apologies! I was worried I went in a little hard on that niche. It’ll be a great thing to learn from. Thank you so much!

4/11/24, 7:32 PM
@[Tom Gungy](/user/show/129727) 👍👍👍
offeringservice26
4/11/24, 4:56 PM
Hmm. I don’t usually leave critical feedback, but this chapter seemed strange to me. I really like the premise of this story, and I thought the first chapter was hot, but I missed having a little bit more descriptive sex scenes in this chapter. It came across to me like “He sucked my dick. Then he sucked my dick again. Then he licked my feet. Then my friend came over and fucked him. Then he licked my feet again. Then a bunch of my friends came over and fucked him 10 times.” Sorry to be negative about it but I thought this one had a lot of potential after the first chapter.