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offeringservice26
4/11/24, 4:56 PM
Hmm. I don’t usually leave critical feedback, but this chapter seemed strange to me. I really like the premise of this story, and I thought the first chapter was hot, but I missed having a little bit more descriptive sex scenes in this chapter. It came across to me like “He sucked my dick. Then he sucked my dick again. Then he licked my feet. Then my friend came over and fucked him. Then he licked my feet again. Then a bunch of my friends came over and fucked him 10 times.” Sorry to be negative about it but I thought this one had a lot of potential after the first chapter.
4/11/24, 3:45 PM
Choices maketh the man. The choice to accept ones mistakes and learn from them, to choose to be better.
4/11/24, 3:28 PM
Well, I hadn’t considered a “Door #3” option. But I guess it’s up to what’s behind #1 & #2. Lol. Can’t wait.
4/11/24, 7:50 AM
The plot thickens! I am still hoping they end up perversely happy. A long weekend, spring break, summer, christmas, long may this story continue 🤣

4/11/24, 3:11 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Heh maybe I'll have to do some special holiday "episodes" at some point. Maybe stuffing Chris for thanksgiving 😜
Anonymous
4/11/24, 2:22 PM
I wrote a longer comment that got eaten by the void so all I'm going to say is Holy fuck. Both endings please, and a third secret ending you havent even hinted at, please and thank you
eagerboy415
4/11/24, 1:55 PM
Team mistakes here. One final pitfall Brad can’t escape
4/11/24, 10:54 AM
Will this story be finished???
4/11/24, 10:23 AM
so damn good!!
mikegay4u
4/11/24, 7:33 AM
For sure, one of the best stories I've ever read.
4/11/24, 7:07 AM
Feeling a little like a broken record at this point, but it bears repeating: great chapter, FreeThinker! How many times has Dunc had his mind zapped by the machine now? I'm surprised his brain hasn't melted out of his ears haha...and I'm sure I'm not the only reader who can't wait for alumni weekend!