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4/11/24, 10:54 AM
Will this story be finished???
4/11/24, 10:23 AM
so damn good!!
mikegay4u
4/11/24, 7:33 AM
For sure, one of the best stories I've ever read.
4/11/24, 7:07 AM
Feeling a little like a broken record at this point, but it bears repeating: great chapter, FreeThinker! How many times has Dunc had his mind zapped by the machine now? I'm surprised his brain hasn't melted out of his ears haha...and I'm sure I'm not the only reader who can't wait for alumni weekend!
Anonymous
4/11/24, 7:03 AM
I love this story! Very well-written, and loved that we got to delve more into the lore of magic in this reality. Im definitely glad brad came out on top, but would loved to have seen drake messing with brad more (making him unable to think about other things and even more physical transformations in order to show the boundaries of the power and extent to which drake had over brad...like, definitely want to see the big-titted barbie and straight versions of brad/kal come out, as well as others).
Jerry
4/10/24, 11:36 PM
The best story I have read on here in weeks. Thank You

4/11/24, 4:34 AM
@[Jerry](/user/show/924759) My pleasure man
4/11/24, 4:15 AM
I just woke up so forgive me for the dumb humor, but it could be funny if "mistakes" refer to us, the readers. Like we'll receive a very short nonsensical paragraph, in a CYOA Goosebumps style. In more seriousness, I think it would be cool if you use the diverging plot tool and let us see both options. Only if you have the time/will for that of course.
4/11/24, 3:10 AM
Oh wow, thats a very hot corruption of a christian jock boy. I wonder whats gonna happen next. What or who would be the next corrupted.
4/8/24, 7:50 PM
It still has me wondering what's next. I never realized how bearish Eric is. MMM, leather daddy bear sounds lovely.

4/10/24, 10:13 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I love a good sexy bear so I usually envision my characters as some sort of bear/dadbod/beef cake. But if the physical description doesn't really effect the story than I sometimes leave it vague. I like being able to envision my own preferences on characters so I try to explained that to my readers.

4/11/24, 2:31 AM
@[Cargo Cub](/user/show/10027653) Sounds good. I imagine them both in many ways.
4/11/24, 12:54 AM
Excuse the repeat of words, but the choices are ambiguous haha. Mistakes are just choices with regrets of some form in hindsight. I guess based on the story this far, mistakes (whether just regretting not to see Ethan, or casting a curse on another warlock, or something untold and even more chaotic 😈) sounds like a more reasonable conclusion than choices, which would imply a happy ending, especially when compared to the other option. I'd personally love to see what it was like from Kals perspective at the start. Loosing his otherwise reality controlling powers and becoming a toxic alpha, slave to his own dick, not that he'd see it that way 😂

4/11/24, 2:17 AM
@[Rapids](/user/show/1149812) I did consider a spin-off chapter from Kal’s PoV, but it would be outside of the main story, and likely include more straight sex than I want to write. I might write that interlude eventually, but one thing I like is how defined a character Kal is by his absence. In the first 7 chapters, Kal is in 2 of them, but his choices and mistakes (hah) and natural inclinations towards man-sex are more important to the story than any other character other than Brad, and I think it’s a toss up as to if Kal or Brad are more important.