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Anonymous
4/11/24, 2:22 PM
I wrote a longer comment that got eaten by the void so all I'm going to say is Holy fuck. Both endings please, and a third secret ending you havent even hinted at, please and thank you
eagerboy415
4/11/24, 1:55 PM
Team mistakes here. One final pitfall Brad can’t escape
4/11/24, 10:54 AM
Will this story be finished???
4/11/24, 10:23 AM
so damn good!!
mikegay4u
4/11/24, 7:33 AM
For sure, one of the best stories I've ever read.
4/11/24, 7:07 AM
Feeling a little like a broken record at this point, but it bears repeating: great chapter, FreeThinker! How many times has Dunc had his mind zapped by the machine now? I'm surprised his brain hasn't melted out of his ears haha...and I'm sure I'm not the only reader who can't wait for alumni weekend!
Anonymous
4/11/24, 7:03 AM
I love this story! Very well-written, and loved that we got to delve more into the lore of magic in this reality. Im definitely glad brad came out on top, but would loved to have seen drake messing with brad more (making him unable to think about other things and even more physical transformations in order to show the boundaries of the power and extent to which drake had over brad...like, definitely want to see the big-titted barbie and straight versions of brad/kal come out, as well as others).
Jerry
4/10/24, 11:36 PM
The best story I have read on here in weeks. Thank You

4/11/24, 4:34 AM
@[Jerry](/user/show/924759) My pleasure man
4/11/24, 4:15 AM
I just woke up so forgive me for the dumb humor, but it could be funny if "mistakes" refer to us, the readers. Like we'll receive a very short nonsensical paragraph, in a CYOA Goosebumps style. In more seriousness, I think it would be cool if you use the diverging plot tool and let us see both options. Only if you have the time/will for that of course.
4/11/24, 3:10 AM
Oh wow, thats a very hot corruption of a christian jock boy. I wonder whats gonna happen next. What or who would be the next corrupted.